Wait, wait, wait, wait, WAIT! Kagome didn't have a weak heart in the series, (sorry to be pesimistic but,) she had the strongest and biggest heart out of all of them! This is inaccurate! Well written, but inaccurate! But VERY well written.

that was sad. )':
but good.
inuyasha was a little too overdramatic, i guess you could say,
cried too much.
but it was good.
4 stars(if i could give stars) (:

This was excellent; sad, but very, very well thought out. Would make a great episode.

*tear* so sad yet so good! great job as always!

So sad, very well written. I should have known InuYasha was the one behind it, it only clicked just before the killing happened before Kagome.

Oh my gosh!! This was a great story, I even cried during it. Great use of describing everything and making it seem so real. One of my top favorite stories.

This is so heart breaking and tragic! I was in tears, this is my third time reading it already I believe. Poor Inuyasha. You really know how to make a good storyline like how Inuyasha was the one who ended up killing Kagome. Wow. Amazing. :)

Oh my gosh... what a wonderfully made story!... Really great... though it was really sad that it had to end like that... poor Kagome, poor Inuyasha... great job though, really great... give yourself a pat on your back! thumbs up...

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ohh.
my.
gosh.
you are an amazing writer. the feeling in that was amazing and i can imagine that very thing happening. thank you for writing that.

Arrgh! Sob! Sob!

Maybe have a follow up where Kagome reincarnates (hopefully with a stronger heart) and stops him demon-side?

i loved this story! the emotions were so strong, so well done, that anyone reading this just has to take part of it with them.

you made me feel inuyasha's pain. you made me feel his fear of being left alone. even with friends, kagome was his whole world. she was his reason for being. when he knew she would be leaving, he left first, so he wouldn't be left behind.

i could see the ending coming, almost from the beginning, but the story and the writing were so compelling that it didn't detract from my desire to read the whole story.

thank you for posting a most beautiful story.

Are you going to continue this story? Its a really great story.

This is a powerful and painful piece that you have written. The anguish that Inuyasha goes through is palpable. Even when he sees another youkai going through the same kind of thing, he doesn't realize what he is doing. The ending was also poignant because Inuyasha realizes that his own actions are what killed his beloved. Great Job!

The only real thing that I would change in this is that you often use elipses (...) and hyphens (--) as pauses in thought where a comma would do far better. Elipses are usually used for things that are left out.

Thanks so for writing this for us!

Great Story! i swear i cried from beginning to end, i had to stop like 6 times to try to calm myself down. it was sad but still awsome ^_^