I didn't think you would continue this. So, I'm pleasantly surprised. XD Again, beautiful writing and the depths you bring to your characters are wonderful. Love how you make Sephiroth so complex.

beautiful, amazing description, I love all that you said about the churcha nd about the televisions, the crowds trying to watch on the television etc... beautiful description and writing as always. It seems strange that someone would find this boring!

This is quite beautifully written and very different. There is such a maturity about it and the relationship comes across convincing. Loved your Sephiroth. :)

i was boerd from the beggining i couldnt be botherd to read the rest you need to have a really catchy beggining and i diddnt it is a uniform tecnically right but has no flare.

Strange story, I wouldn't have thought Aeris or Sephiroth would talk that way. I had to look twice to see if it was Genesis - somehow the conversations sound more like him and his endless quoting of Loveless.

It was good though, keep up the good work.

Well, this is my favorite chapter thus far. I like the dialog and the sensual tension here is good, too, with the added spice of shared memory.

Hope you don't leave off HERE... Good grief.

wow, another amazing chapter, i adore your writing style. I really like the start of the chapter, and wish i could write this well. I love the information you give about their past.

Oh, what a lovely piece of work! Please update soon! It's so rare that a story on weaves together anything but the insipid...I'm absolutely spoiled on your writing! (subscribes to all alerts possible :)

wow, I love this writing style and the description, and the way she is slowly getting more confused. I love the way you give the characters such depth.

So I've been trying to get in touch with you and realized that your email still might not be working. This was the only alternative I could find. Let me know if you have a new email or if your current one's working. I think chapter 3 only needs grammar/punctuation revisions, to answer your question.
And I do hope you haven't given up. Hope to talk to you soon.

I must admit that this has been one of the more entertaining pieces I've read in a while. I especially enjoy how you can recreate more multifaceted personalities without heavily straying away from their original dispositions (esp. Aeris). Another thing that I find rather interesting about your fanfic is that you were able to integrate an original character without heavily interfering with the general storyline. The pace is going wonderfully, but it seems that you've not posted anything for a while. It's wonderfully done, and I hope you write more when you have the chance.

Ack! I'm sorry it took me so long to review this--real life catches up to you when you least expect it!

Anyway, I really enjoy this slow burn of a build-up. The whole atmosphere is mysterious, unsettling, with all these little hints of danger. I'm excited to see the next chapter and how you progress the little tangled relationships between characters.

It was tough to pick just one, but my favorite line is: "...what with that corpse skin and hands as though sculpted in foggy ice." Yikes. Love it!

this is a beautifully written story with lovely imagery and clever characterization. very inventive. i am eager for you to follow up with this.

The Wong Kar-Wai is dripping off of this, sweetie and OH MY GOD I love you for it. He is one of my favorite directors of all time, your homage to him has inspired me.You write so well, especially in th beginning. My hair was standing up on the back of my neck, seriously. Beautifully written, and with Wong Kar-Wai based imagery... *sigh* You are seriously the best. *rushes off to watch In The Mood For Love*

wow! amazing description, and it raises a lot of questions Fantastic information, please keep writing, you are very talented! the last section in particular contained absolutely wonderful descripton, but thats throughout the whole thing. i really like the way you show Seph's thoughts as well.