Reviews for The new saints in Boston

Reviews For: The new saints in Boston

lostcb 2008-06-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseI really like your story! I hope you come out with your next one soon cuz like your friend, I can't get enough!^.^
lostcb 2008-05-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseI just want to say that your story is great so don't think that it's not^.^ Can't wait for the next one to come out! I'll watch with excited anticipation! ^.^
Sylistra the scholar 2008-05-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseUsually I don't review, and I normally read Labyrinth fanfics but I felt adventurous. I do not normally read boondock saints because people don't normally write the brother's right their either way to violent and serious or so accursedly playful you don't know what to think. But it's difficult to sit their and read it when you see so many mistakes. No offense but all that everyone does is put female OC's in for the boys and if not that then their is incest afoot-yeesh it get's old. However though your idea is common it is written well. There are few mistakes in the characters and I like how you use a mixture of first and third person POVs. I like the similarities of the other Saints with the Macmanus Bros. But don't you think two sets of saints in one city is a bit much? There are several cities today that have a great need of Saints. I like the french to, it makes it a little different and interesting. Keep up the writing if you ever feel unsure of your characters watch the movie a few more times.
AmeMizu 2008-04-30 ch 2,	abuseI love it! lol. Super! I love the whole twin twin thing. And I like how you don't just focus on one pair. You seem to give both pairs equal coverage. It would be totally fantastic if you'd write more.
Jade Opal 2008-04-30 ch 2, anon.	abusehey wolf. I took the liberty to check that french phrase...it didn't come out right. it's 'Le seigmeur choisissent leur destin'. that's what you wanted. 'Lord chose their destiny'='Le seigmeur choisissent leur destin'. If you need help with editing this, drop me an email. I'm a beta reader and I'll be more than happy to help ya on any future chapters. The latin version of this phrase is 'Senior electus suum fatum'.
dragonzfire718 2008-04-30 ch 2,	abuseI do like the way that you got to bring the guys in it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
A Hotter Kiss A Better Touc... 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseSince you're holding out for four reviews, I will fulfill your quota. This is officially your fourth review: I’m looking forward to where this is going. And ditto on IFHD's thoughts. Indeed! A.H.K.A.B.T.
WWESupernatural102292 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuse♥♥ed it!! Can't wait for more! I hope the boys are in the next one.
alandava 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseCute story. Kind of has a feel of The Devil Wears Prada crossed with BDS. I look forward to see where you take it. P.S. Smecker likes his cafe latte with sweet and low and a twist of lemon. lol alandava
dragonzfire718 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseI like the story so far. I like how you started the background for the girls. Keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter.
I Fancy Hugh Dancy 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abusehaha, Oh Greenly, still up to his old tricks! I thought this was good. It's always nice to see background on the characters, so I don't mind that much that the Saints haven't made an appearance yet! :) As for constructive criticism, having multiple points of view is fine, but just watch out for "tense jumping" and various grammatical errors (such as commas). Also, watch out for the common mistakes, such as "your" instead of "you're" and all that jazz. Overall, however, it's a very interesting story. I like May and Molly. Keep it up! xx IFHD

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