LOL gay
natsume gay...
wat if he said yes? o.o
rofl
that was funny ^-^

wahaha!
it's actually funny!
wahaha!

nice one!
And funny how mikan thinks that her BOYFRIEND, natsume is gay!!
Hahahaha!

hahaha! mikan is so curious!

i love this!

Haha, that made me laugh! Nice story! hehe

Natsume gay? haha Foolish mikan! hehe

>giggles and rolls on the floor<

I'm exaggerating >blushes

funny ^_^

Hi! I just happen to pass by your profile through xxGAG, nice story! It was really funny. :)) Mikan thought Natsume being gay is just so hilarious! Please make more cute stories. :)) Always take care.

XD

it was really funny, and original if I must say.

I like the story, and the plot very much. Don't worry, you will improve, and don't be shy asking some help with your friends, like this one, you asked for a beta-reader right? If you put our heart into it, you will surely improve. :)

Wahh! I like this one tsu-nee-chan! It's really funny to think that natsume is gay! Great work! Thanks for updating the a debt to pay! TC

ang ganda.!! =)
i like the plot..sobra..

sori ngayon lang ako naka remember mag review, dahil sa sobrang ganda nito...kinikilig at nag DAYDREAM. haha! x3

P.S. ame-kun.!! c katiie to.. =))

LMAO!! That was one of your best fics! xDD So funny. xDD I nearly cracked up when I read that Natsume actually stuck his finger out. xDD The ending was so sweet! xDD Your writing has improved! xD Anyways, good luck on your other fics! ^^

ahhaha.. i love the part when he said.. thanks for the kiss, girlfriend..lol.. nice... cute story..ahhah

Hehe...funny story! Please make too other one-shots like this one! ^.^
Thank you for making it...

know what it's really cute and funny I really like it...^-^ =3

swet especially the last sentence...pls update soon