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| lethargylass 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuse"I hope he’s lactose intolerant. Gluten intolerant, too." hehe! This is really cool, I like it! Just a suggestion, but I happened to notice that you're on livejournal. You might want to post this at the Piper_Trickster community(http://community./piper_trickster/). Theres also a general rogues community, if you're interested. (http://community./flash_rogues/). |
| Chin 2008-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it, a lot. Both the actual story, and how you've used centering, bolding and so to structure it. Something that really stood out was how you managed to give clear descriptions with a limited number of words. Very effective. Maybe you already know this, but there's a Piper and Trickster comm on lj, named piper_trickster. I'm sure they'd enjoy the story too. |
| Madripoor Rose 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseOh I love this! Of course TRICKSTER would come for the trickster! Great story. |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Always nice to see a good oneshot in a world where too many people think they need to write fanfiction novels. :) |