ah this is so cute. the ending is a bit confusing, but it's alright. i liked the little bit of sasuke's awkwardness that was shown.

Oh, I really loved this oneshot! Definitely to my favs! :3

I love the Naruto is the heart...Kakashi is the brain...you are the limbs but Sakura is the soul bit. It is beautiful. Especially how you said it was incalculable what she added to their lives.

It's not often I get to see second person, and most are leery of it, but you did this very well. Great job.

"You make your way to Sakura's house and try to remember his name. Once you know his name, you can find out where he lives, and once you find out where he lives, you can kill him. Considering your own power and the fact that he's a civilian, it shouldn't be difficult. Once you explain the circumstances to Tsunade you're sure she'll understand. Anyone who hurts Sakura like this deserves to die in a very messy, excruciatingly painful way.

You're aware that the list of people who hurt Sakura probably includes your name somewhere near the top, so by your logic you deserve to die, but you figure you'll buy your life by picking off the people below you."

This particular part had me laughing for about 20 minutes straight. I think I pulled a muscle or two while at it.

"You are fuming. There's another one! Another one of these assholes Sakura gets involved with who don't treat her as she deserves. You want to shake her, to scream at her that she should go out and date someone who will appreciate her true worth."

This one, too.

Sasuke can be so clueless and if you use that, the story can be so great and hilarious if you want to. You used it well.

i swear this is soooo cute ,i started screaming out loud and my mom freaked out!

Adorable! I love Sasuke's reaction!

Inside Sasuke's indifferent facade, he really is just another crazy teenage boy, isn't he? I love your portrayal of is inner angst and regret. I love your creative use of second person. I love your poetic, beautiful lines that I am tempted to print and hang on my wall (if I did, I would surely give credits).

Amazing job, and one of my favorite SasuSaku to date. Keep up the great work!

This was really cute. )

Oh my... That last part was unexpected... And that's EXACTLY what makes this story amazing! Please tell me you're aiming for a career in writing because I'm going to need some inspiration! Thank you!

Great! Love this. Make more sasusaku

I know that youre not active in FFN anymore, but I will always love your epic lines and characterizations. :)

aaaaawe, so cute! You go Sasuke!

So cute and romantic!

Yay, I loved this fic. Thank you for write it!