Love it. :D So much. 33333 Many congrats to you and your beta-reader. Very well done!

good story!

I think the best lines of the story were how the members of Team 7 are all part of a body... I read those lines again and again and every time they seem more fitting.

This was good. I liked it :(

OMG it wa so god ! you'll have to make another chap !

This is the kind of one shot you want to read every time you get a little sad about lack of interaction between SS in the actual real story, because it is cute and funny and super in character. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for being awesome.

Woww, nice!

amusing Gaara bit you slipped in there ;)

very sweet! I loved it! 3

Aw, way to go Sasuke! I loved how he so casually made him her boyfriend.

Aww! Very adorable and excellent writing. I love his POV you used, and it sounded a lot like how he would sound too.

very creative, loved it.

-rayluva4

Great was a pleasant read, it flowed nicely.

It's nice to see stories from Sasuke's POV.

That's a nice ending. :) Leaves me all warm and fuzzy. teehee!

that was way cute! omfg! soo cute!

bybyyu

was really my first time to read this kind of POV.

i loved it

I picked up this story reading the unfamiliar title and realized that it's the fifth time I've read this.

The title is desceptively simple, so when I started reading, I noticed that it wasn't the first time, nor the second. Every time I pick it up, I remember how good it was the last time and I read it all the way through again.

And it also occurred to me that I've never commented on how I liked this story. So here we are. Great job portraying a jealous Sasuke! I love the point of view of this story, it's very unique!

Maybe I'll comment the sixth time I roll around to this one-shot. .