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| Flyer without Wings 2008-04-22 ch 4, | abuseWow, this is a really neat story. I like that you have her be able to feel other people's emotions. It is a nice touch and the explosion thing is cool too. |
| Clarissa 2008-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! please write more. i want to know where it's going. cant wait for the next update! one thing tho... you may want to proof read bc there are some mistakes and i just get distracted... but it's still awesome! |