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Reviews For: The New One

Flyer without Wings
2008-04-22
ch 4,
abuseWow, this is a really neat story. I like that you have her be able to feel other people's emotions. It is a nice touch and the explosion thing is cool too.
Clarissa
2008-04-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it! please write more. i want to know where it's going. cant wait for the next update! one thing tho... you may want to proof read bc there are some mistakes and i just get distracted... but it's still awesome!
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