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StoriesThatNeverWere
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. This is exactly as I picture Logan's feelings for Zoey. The best Z/L I've read on the site. Great work.
lorna
2008-04-18
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is an awsome storey...hope you update soon...i realy liked it!
druccillamalfoyrox
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseAwe
I loved this.
I really hate Logan/Zoey as a couple, but you did a good job, and i really liked how you kinda had the underlying love of quinn for logan the whole time, and at the end he dreamt of her!!
that was cute.
you did a really good job.
Jess
jesse
2008-04-14
ch 1, anon.
abusehey, this was mad good.
i think you should deff add more to it
and the whole Quinn twist at the end...
AMAZING.
CrazyGirlofManyNames
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely written. Good job.
gypsyeyes91
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseOkay, just to let you know, this is going to be a long review.

Well first, I've never actually read a Logan/Zoey fic. Well, one, but I didn't finish it. I don't really lioke the pairing usually, but this made so much sense, it was like, "of course he would like her!" It was AWESOME! Like, if I wasn't a Quogan freak, I'd probably be converted to this pairing just from this fic. Seriously, you gave logan such a great mindset; how you explained every mean thing he did being a result of his struggle to hide his feelings, it just really flowed so well.

I also love your plot. The one line, where you say something like Logan could take anything but seeing Zoey on the ground, lifeless? It was beautiful. Words cannot describe how touching that sentence was for me. The other line that had the same effect was where Quinn was crying seeing Logan get beat up. It was like, idk just so awesome, like I really got sucked in to what you were saying. Honestly.

I think maybe my favorite parts were 1) when Logan just lets Chuck beat him up like it's no big deal, because he doesn't mind the pain becuase Zoey went through it too, and 2), the end, wehre Quinn wants so badly to tell Logan what she feels, but she's nervous, and how he dreams of her?

Yeah. This gets like five zillion stars from me, and a spot on my favorites list for sure. You're amazingly talentd, I look forward to more from you (hopefully) soon.
gypsyeyes91
TheVioletShadow
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was simply...amazing. I love that Logan has unrequited love for Zoey and Quinn has unrequited love for Logan. What a triangle!

And he dreamt of Quinn...so sweet.

You should write more Q/L fics. You are an awesome writer with great talent.
l-NonToxic-l
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome, seriously.

And I personally think you should at LEAST make it a two-shot. With Logan struggling between Zoey and Quinn, and Quinn not wanting to leave Mark and be alone if Logan doesn't like her.

I think it could be really good, especially since you're such an amazing writer.

I loved this. There's really nothing else to say, it was just so good!
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