Awesome!
would you be willing to continue this story from POV's of other characters and what their "job" is after the fall of the dynasty? if you would, that would rock, but there is no pressure...

~LadyUadjet

I liked your poetry, but I really enjoy reading your dialogue between the warlords. I actually imagined Sekhmet and Dais having a conversation that went sort of opposite of what you wrote. I would see Sekhmet being the angry one who has a little bit of a temper and takes the bait Dais offers. I see Dais as an instigator and someone who likes to coax his enemies into having arguments with him because he knows he can win verbal fights. However, under the circumstances, reversing the roles and imagining it in the opposite order was great to read.

Very good!! Your stories always are ^.-

Very nice Izzy. But, I think that you did this story once before a while back! And, was that person in blue and white The Ancient One, or was that Anubis?