This was really nice! I like how Isaak waits until he falls asleep to torment him. And the vase breaking was a nice touch.

yes, fairytales can be cruel. Have you heard the one called "Bluebeard's castle"?

Well written I salute your skills! *salutes*

fantastic! i've been obsessed with that scene from the manga and im really glad someone wrote about it. i didn't think they were OOC at all. good job ^_^

Awesome, so glad your writing IxD!!

Love the whole fairytale thing. And don't worry, they are cannon ... I mean the panel that inspired this so totally implies that there is something going on.

write more!! This fandom needs it ... really.

Trinity Blood and its characters DO NOT belong to me. Strictly speaking, I am not sure whether my characters can even be considered canon. Beware of OOC-ness.


Ha I can SO agree with that when it comes to my own fics. But I love this, and I think they ARE in character by canon. Nice surprise, seeing as I all but gave up checking this TB section (because most everything in it is awful) but I checked today for some reason and found THIS. I thought I had you on AA but I guess not. -_- Anyway, like it very much. I like my IxD nonconsensual, pervert that I am, and it very rarely gets written well. MOAR.

Oo I like the take on fairy tales,
well RCO style ;]
I like the less is more theory towards their intimacy, as well as the use of classic fairy tales with a cruel twist throughout, the overpowering theme of Isaak and the helplessness of Dietrich for a obvious contrast, the descriptions and mental imagary pairing with sharp colors and sounds, ugh so much I like about it really ^_^
Excellent work!
I'm not sure I'll see fairy tales the same now, but that's not really a bad thing I guess.