Sarramaks,
Just finished reading Hotwired. Very good!! You do have a way of putting in just enough detail. I'm new here to and don't know anything about those Awards you mentioned in one of your notes, but I hope you did well.

I've been reading your story "Hotwired" and am enjoying it very much. I just finihsed chapter 9 "Coincidences Made from Glass" and was wondering... when the paprmedics arrived, Captain Glass introduced 'Detecitve Taylor' & 'Detective Angell' then how come the parameic in the back of the ambulance called her Jessica? How did her know her first name? Perhaps this comes into play later, perhaps it means nothing, I'm just curious. I gotta get back to reading now.

I bow down to you my queen.
Holy _ this is one heck of a story.
Hugs and kisses
Mel

i thk the plot bunnies for holding u hostage

Pleaz hurry up and write more!

Excellent story. :-)
I loved it ^^

Sequel please love it.

WOW. This was one of the stories that I read all the chapters before reviewing... And I have to say that this is the absolute best CSI: NY fics focusing on Flack and Angell that I have EVER read. The writing was simply beautiful, the story even better!

~Andromeda~

Words cannot describe what I am feeling right now. With having to go to work the only major distraction, I have read this epic and outstanding story non-stop.

I am astounded and thrilled, every aspect of this story had me gripped and I experienced the entire range of emotions you have provided in your writing. I laughed at the perfection of Flack/Angel's banter and the teasing of Danny and the others. I fangirled at the romance, the beautiful descriptions of Don and Jess' connection, I was gripped by the case and how Flack and Angell's family knew each other in the past. Anguished and shocked at the marvelous plot you have weaved, there was never a dull moment!

I only regret that I had not noticed this before, when you were writing this. Else I would have made sure you would have gotten a chapter by chapter review from me. This is a favourite and I wish that the writers of CSI:NY could heed your story and make it a reality.

If this didn't win the NY:fanfiction competition, then I would seriously be doubting those judges decision! I would have voted for this...most definately.

You should be very proud of this story. It is amazing. Thanks for the great read!

Amy.

I just finished reading this story. It was really wonderful. You wrote both the case and the personal relationship stuff very well and I found it had a really nice balance of the two. I think that you wrote the characters very "in-character" as well.

My one complaint is that you seemed to use "passed" instead of "past" in a few places. I am sure it would help if I could point to a specific place, but I can't. Sorry.

Amazing! You got me hooked on F/A.

While sometimes the words were a little Brit-speak (gumption, etc.), I absolutely loved the characterization! And kudos to the plot!

Nice job.

Hey. This story was awesome. It's definately off in my favourite's. :)
I loved the complicated storyline, and then how you made it out to be the most uncomplicated thing in the end. It takes a good writer to be able to do that.
Bye. xox

This story is absolutely beautiful. Your characterizations of Flack and Angell are spot on and just perfect. I really enjoyed Capt. Glass, he fit well into the story. Thank you for writing and sharing this.

What a wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter! You kept me riveted and on the edge of my seat! I really love how you write Flack and Angell! Also, I'm glad that Glass made it out alive!