I loved everything about this story, especially seeing the relationships Danni formed before she became Lizzie. It really drives home how much she must have missed Nicky while living out 24 years of her life on Atlantis. I'm eagerly awaiting your next update to A Time Unknown.

finally made it here. fab as usual. keep up the great work

Loved all the stories, just found them very recently. Unfortunately I can not find the new ones on the Altantis site.

Awesome chapter!!

ah? wha? but?

LOL
you cant stop! im just getting into the swing of things :D
cant wait for more, another story (or two, three...)!

best of luck!
heres a chocolate chip cookie for your muse (.;)

Don't you keep me waiting!



Sorry, I just had to!

This is great stuff, and yes, YES, please, more?!?!?!!

Thanks,

Sam

The first kill, first blood, is always hardest. To sit there faced with the horrific knowledge of what you've just done. The sick feeling of having been forced to end someone's life. To know that this person is gone, no matter how much danger they represented to you and everyone you love, to be forced in that one moment of time to realize it was either them, or you and the people you love.

My heart breaks for her, grieves with her. I know her pain.

This is still great stuff. True to the people, the part of the 'verse they live in. Powerful, feeling, moving...

You my dear are a brilliant writer, but I wonder at the things you must have lived through to now what you do. To be able to weave it into something so well written with so much feeling.

Thank you,

Sam

Thank you for adding the note about General Hammond. I'm confident that the release of Continuum was delayed to honor his passing, and add a memorial note or two to the film. He was, in so many ways even I can't explain to myself, like the Dad I never really had but always wanted.

He is deeply missed.

Your work my dear, is as always, simply wonderful. This all could easily be turned into one heck of a movie you know. Maybe you should reach out to one of Marty or Rob?

Sam

Loved it! A perfect semi-ending to this storyline! If you are going to write a sequel following the Atlantis, Dani/John part...I'm so there.

Something dark? Darker than the NID?

This is good stuff here, very good stuff. Again, I'm thinking book good stuff level!

I really liked the epilogue. I can't wait to start reading the next chapter in Danni's life. Have a great weekend. : )

Hey! First time leaving a review. (yes, I'm bad I know) Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed the story and I'm looking forward to the next part :)

Until then I'm off to read "Torn"

I'm really sorry for not reviewing earlier (shame on me!) but I wanted to let you know that I totally loved both 'The Future Not Foretold' and 'It's Too Soon To Tell'. You had me checking for updates daily and reading the chapters on the edge of my seat!
Keep going!

Great story and nicely told looking forward to the next one when it comes. Thanks for taking the time and sharing it.

wow yet again you have managed to finish another great story!
well done I do love them.
keep them coming they are always a good read.

MDC