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| pdantzler2 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseOh, I had read this somewhere else before, but I had forgotten how sad it was. Dead is really hard on little children, but I think you showed just how it can be on adults as well. This story really shows that Dean and Dad are so much alike as well. I really liked this story and I hope you write more. Off to read your other stuff. |
| dinofossil 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAlways great to see one of yours, and your daddy Winchester was soo squidgy in this. Can't help but love him. |
| melonz 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseomg i loved it! i nearly cried lol! but yeh it was awsum! xx |
| irishgirl9 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseNice job with that! I'm glad that John was able to be there for Dean. I like how you portrayed him as a caring father. |
| JadeSullivan 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely. I love wee!Chesters stories, and this was an exceptional one :) I thought it was very realistic how Dean threw a tantrum after remaining silent for so long. He's young and has a hard time using his words to express himself, so he just has a breakdown. The small spanking he received was necessary to pull him out of his slump and get him to open up about what he was feeling. I appreciate that you made his punishment no more than a few well-earned swats. Nothing more was needed. Again, great job! I'd love to see some more stories like this :) |
| poohbear123 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS AWESOME AND SAD! LOVE HOW JOHN CAME WHEN HIS SON NEEDED HIM. THE SHOW SHOULD HAVE DONE MORE OF THAT. |
| alwaysateen 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat sad story. Amazing that it take something like that to bring back John to his sons. But it was sweet that he wanted to help and run to his eldest. |
| hawngirl 2008-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abusecute and lovely chapter. I like the ending when john was singing dean to sleep |
| sweetysmart0505 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was really really sweet. Good job on this story. I enjoyed reading it! |
| Ghostwriter 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| TCB 0.5 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseHeart-warming and well-written post "Home" story. I especially liked the way you intermixed the time frames, it really worked with what happened then and now. Sammy left such a sweet 'I need help' message on John's cell and Dean's very first tantrum was awesome to read (and clearly understandable at the same time), too. Good to know, John's there for his children whenever they need him. |
| SamandDeanWinchester 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAw that is so cute and awesome but all ur stories r awesone :D ;D *hugs* |