Holy crap wow! O.o this was a good first chapter... i mean i never would have expected that to happen! man i can't wait for the next chapter! please update it soon!

this story is amazing! such a awesome combination of violence and love/lust. When goku popped sanzo's shoulder out of socket i thought "yes! the author wasn't too scared to just settle for some petty scratches and blood! She's going all the way!" It only makes sense for goku to go all bestial/berserker in that mode, i'm glad you didn't balk at the physical violence that came with it. haha, not that i'm trying to be a sadist or anything, it's just good to see it written realistically. You kept both Sanzo in Goku it really good context within the story, I wish i could have read what happened when goku woke up and realized what he did, and how their relationship changed from it! haha, but I'll just have to use my imagination for that part ^_^ thanks for the completely awesome story!!

Loved it! Honestly, there aren't enough Goku sage/ Sanzo stories around. The emotion refelected in Goku towards the end rounded off the whole sexual encounter nicely. I thank you for sharing and hope to read more from you.

you really are good at writing, please write more :)

My God! That's so wonderful. Please continue. I'm looking forward to your new chapters ;_; Please don't let it stop here.

Cool fic! Sanzo pretty much deserved what he got!! Please continue!!

Very good so far, kinda twisted, but still good. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Please update soon. Happy writing.

There is a very fine line between angry sex and rape!! and I'm not a huge supporter of either. . .


BUT! Simply because this was so incredibly hot and it was Sanzo and Goku, I'm willing to ignore the whole lack of consent in the ordeal!

Aw poor little Goku! You kept the characters very much like the original! I hate OOCness! xD

Woot!