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| Dakota the 'Dreamer' 2008-05-02 ch 1,  | abuseHey, you're grammar is perfect, as is the story. Typically Billy Elliot. I can picture the scene perfectly in my head. Dakota x |
| maddy.georgia 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusefor someone who is learning english as a second lanuguage this is avery good fan fic. i love the story line. the way you've written it si different that many other fanfic's i've read as it is in short sentences and very comprehendable. well done |