aww these are lovely is it Gwens Kid Ye? :) I hope you do some more - it could be at the very last one Jack and Iantos kid :) soo cuteness x

Oh that's it - I have a new bedtime story for my own kids! One they will buy into...

wow, that was brilliant, but im truly thick and cant work out who was telling it. but awesome view point on torchwood :)

Aw, you don't really see torchwood in a fairy-tale light, and you never see Jack as the one being rescued (not so literally anyway)

I love how you tell it as well, its a proper bedtime story =]

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Hannah

Aw! I love this! I love the titles you gave everybody, and the ending is really sweet. Well done :c)

Wow! Just, Wow! That was such a cool take on the whole story- although I must admit the teams different titles confused the heck out of me, but I don't care because it makes me happy that Jack and Uncle Ianto are protecting us

Haha, that's beautiful.

*applauds*

I look forwards to moar!

Yes Mum I always go to sleep when you've confused me! LOL

what a beautiful bedtime story