I liked this story and I hope you continue to write fanfiction. Lightblue-Nymphadora recommended you. I like your descriptive prose very much, it was very vivid.

Keep up the good work.

Please disregard my last post..I didn't see that the story was completed.

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This was very well written..I enjoyed it very much..I see it's been almost two years since last update...is the story abandoned?

I'll add it to my alerts just in case.

Wow! That was great! Had me on the edge of my seat.

Excellent! This is one of the best stories that I have ever read on Fanfiction.

Please keep up with this great writing and update soon with a new story.

-(-)- Mark -(-)-

I cant wait for the next chapter :)

WHAT THE HELL? That's the end? Ok, just a couple of things:

1) Quit using the word "darkness". Thesaurus that shit...:D

2) Dialogue gets its own paragraph. Each time someone says something, it should be a new line.

3) Want me to beta?

Hugs, kisses, and cookies!

**LbN**

Hm this one is abit darker. So that necklace is really going to wreck havoc on their sleep. So how will they discuss their nightmares?

Now that was one bad nightmare alright. Somehow I can think of it being slightly worse... thank goodness it's not!

But you have me wondering just HOW Harry is seeing her nightmare as it happened?

Whoa. I never read the last book BECAUSE of that stupid ending. (Believe me I would say worse but I'm very much editing my thoughts.)

I'm very much aware of this scene because there are so many fanfics on it. Your version seems very intense.

Hahaha, I got a shout out!

Anyway, still doing alright! I like the way it's coming together. Some of the sections are choppy; try putting some of the shorter sentences together (semicolons and comas are your friend!) and try not to start a bunch of sentences with the same word. Other than that, bien!

Holy hell...

Darker then the ohters I have read whit this theme

ok...I'm intrigued.

I love the story is really good! I'm already a fan. Update soon