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| The Yukikage 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseYou have your pick, the intelligent Nina, the sadistic Ragki, but not the ice man Yuki. He's already in 2 of my stories. |
| The Yukikage 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseNice, good boy, have a cookie. |
| Lord Hokage 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abuseWhat the hell KTL Harimeki Shiruba... Wait someone is missing! It is Zane The Heroic best freind of Shiruba. You know Zane lives in a big house, his parents are dead but other than that it is great MORE MORE MORE MORE ZANE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ZANE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ZANE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ZANE MORE MORE did i say ZANE yet. |
| Raiu the master of smash br... 2008-06-02 ch 2, | abuseSweet reminds me of the song raining blood by slayer,but as i said er...typed good,Also i wonder when Haburu steps in? (my oc remeber i sent his profile to you a while back) |
| Drifter of the Forgotten On... 2008-05-19 ch 2, | abuseGreat story man, keep it up Shiruba! |
| Chiisai Shiroi Wolf 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseyou made some mistakes in the second chapter. EX: The maid that previously slapped Shiruba went beside Hirameki. "There, There I sent some ninja to teach that little 'thing' a listen." (listen should be lesson) There was another, several times when Akane was fighting the wolf you said wolfs mouth. (it should be wolf's mouth) |
| LightStripe 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abusePoor Shiruba, I almost cried... :( So far I like the story. I hope you update it soon because its now on my alert list! *^^* Awesome! So awesome! I Luv it! |
| -Kuroi no Sakura- 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abusePoor Shiruba...How could those people treat him like that... Good story-^_^- |
| Aurora-Powerpunk 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abuseyay good chapter! |
| Chiisai Shiroi Wolf 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abusePoor Shiruba, I almost cried... :( So far I like the story. I hope you update it soon because its now on my alert list! *^^* |
| Graveside Rose 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseYES! EXPLOSIONS! FIGHTS! CHOAS! This is what I've been looking for! |
| Akane -Shiruba's sis- 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseAwesome! So awesome! I Luv it! |
| Masque of the Red Death 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseHey... You made the shop explode! Good job! ' -Fin |
| Aurora-Powerpunk 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseAw Shiruba so sad!! I'll be your friend! This is so sad. Please continue though. ^_^ *cries* |
| JarOfDoom 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI... uhm... liked it? Eheh! This is kinda awkward... But... yeah... It was good... yeah... Eheh! Uhm... Good luck with continuing it, then... If you do continue it, I mean... Hope ya' do... Let's see... uhm... Yeah, so that's it... Eheh eheh! Toodles! uhm... Yeah... that's it... that's what I was gonna say... uhm... I meant type... yeah... |