A great story. Very good.

Aw... Very short, but very cute! ^-^ Loved it!

Hey, you! I really like this...short, simple, and very sweet. Sort of like a poem...I dunno. But I really liked it, it felt poetic, and a lovely dose of W/E. Great job!

love from Emma

"Once is quite enough" ~Captain Jack Sparrow

He died for a second too however. He was stabbed by Davy!

Wow! I never thought of that before...good analogy and such. Great story, however short it may be =D

Very clever take on the affect of Elizabeth's kisses! That makes complete sense and is very true. Good work!