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| Perfect love kills all fear 2008-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseUm ok, I can honestly say I have never read something like that. It is sort of sappy but Neji cares about tenten. YEA. Story is going on favorites. sakuraxcherryxblossom |
| Pyromaniac-Girl 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was a sweet fic. It was kind of Neji to bring her favourite tea when he came over. I hope that you will have a good day! |
| xxfatal 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseSHUT UP, RUFFLE. This wasn't sappy. It was super-sweet, and maturely written. I think you portrayed Tenten to the dot in this; she's so lovable, but herself. Parts of it, I have to admit, seemed a smidgen repetitive, and Neji could have been more IC, but overall, this was well-executed. I'm sorry this isn't the epic, lenghty reviews you were expecting, Ruffle, but there really isn't much to say. I like it supremely, and that's that. I guess I could seriously nitpick, if you wanted me to. (Contact me if you do.) But it's almost 3 AM, and, ahaha, I should be going to sleep. Toodles. xxfatal. P.S. Did I mention I especially love the defiant-will-drink-hot-tea!Tenten? Well, I do. |
| xPrincessGothx 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is just to cute! And in the opening thing-y of the story, you're right! A lot of people say that Neji loves her "silky long brown hair" or can't stop staring into her "gorgeous, sparkling, hazel eyes" Finally, one about her hands. (I are[yes "are"] happy with your 1-shots!) ~Sayu-chan |
| .Poisoned Scarlet. 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one-shot! Its cute and a bit sappy, not alot...ecept in the Neji part XD but who cares!? Its good neh? Panda-chan |
| Xeaphon 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseVery heart warming. |
| wikki6 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, it might be the sappiest thing you've ever written, but it's really cute, which, for me, is great because I'm a sucker for fluff xD |
| sweet-spiced crack 2008-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abusediz iz cute really... dey r sweet... and romantic... wizh u cud make more...^.^ |
| JanuaryFriend 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet, and to the point. I loved it, and I don't think Neji was out of character at all, especially if this takes place later in their lives. Good job! |
| XxKikuNaraxX 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute. :D you should write another one. |
| kaname's harisen 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was very sweet! I actually never thought about TenTen's hands before... I suppose they would take alot of abuse. You painted a nice little scene here. I do have one little critique- I don't think you need "at least once" in "Tenten hates having to go the hospital at least once every winter for something as trivial as that". It's just a matter of flow. Really, that's the only thing I could find even remotely negative about it. Very well done! |