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kd8gun
2008-08-20
ch 5,
abuseLove the interactions between naruto and benihime. I'm wondering what your gonna do with the fight between hayate and baki. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Kagegakure no Sato
2008-08-19
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, very interesting. This first chapter is very well thought out only thing I can comment on is the spelling and thats not too bad. Great choice of Znpakuto! I hardly if ever see Naruto have Benihime. Now my only question is, is Naruto the reincarnation of Kisuke or is it for another reason that Naruto feels that Benihime is so familiar?

Well thats it from me I hope the other chapters are just as good. Well Ja!
Bassclone13
2008-08-17
ch 4,
abuseAwesome story, I love how you put in Benihime. I know it's been 4 months since you last updated and your probably bust with Reload but I'd love to see this continued. It's pretty awesome, haha.
ixworryxyou
2008-08-14
ch 5,
abuseGAH PLEASE UPDATE SOON An...WTF CAPS LOcks on...anyways update soon please this is so bad-ass.
Zarcade
2008-08-14
ch 5,
abuseFucking awesome, the way you have Naruto and Benihime interact with eachother and the way they react to the outside world is just amazing, and that last line was just pure overload in regards epicness:
"'Just wait, Sakura-chan. For you, for Hinata... for myself... I swear I will cut that fucking wall apart!'"

I hope you and your muses are doing well, greatly anticipating your next update, sincerely

/Zarcade
uo-chou
2008-08-13
ch 5,
abuseExcellent read, I really like it so far. I'm looking forward to the next installment. I keep wondering, though, does Naruto's new power oppose his chakra? Can he use both at once, when the 5 point seal is lifted?
nitrous
2008-08-12
ch 5,
abuseI can't wait for the next chapter! Please put Benihime (her lady form, not her sword form) in more scenes.
Tristan76
2008-08-08
ch 5,
abuseI've noticed that you haven't updated this story in about four months and I was wondering if you have abandoned or put the story on hiatus. I hope its neither because it really is a well written Fic. In fact, its almost how a normal person thinks and talks; the way you write. Quite good and better than 95% of the other Fics I have read. Now, Can Naruto still use the Kyuubi's Chakra? Is anyone going to remove the Five-point elemental seal from his stomach? Will he eventually develop a Bankai state? I have a lot of questions, but these are the most important ones for know. I really hope you haven't quit this Fic because it really is a great Fic. Later
granite69
2008-08-07
ch 5,
abusethis is fucking awesome, the relationship between naruto and benihime is realy well written, is naruto gonna learn the bloodmist shield the kisuke uses when he was training ichigo cause that is pretty cool
King Hawke
2008-08-07
ch 5,
abusethis story is a work of genius!! how you created Benihime and got Naruto's new trainer...amazing! I have already recommended this story to my friends. it's spectacular! keep writing! I look forward to reading it.
Detective Ethan Redfield
2008-08-04
ch 5,
abuseinteresting. Very interesting. Keep it up.
The PhantomHokage
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abuseGreat story so far I love it I hope you can update soon
Stella Solaris
2008-08-01
ch 1,
abuseBriliantly written ! I am especially impressed by Naruto's '' relationship '' with his sword, moving and powerful =D
APatchOfSunlight
2008-08-01
ch 5,
abuseThat was just friggin beautiful, I havn't even seen any bleach plot yet and its still wonderfully entrancing. Keep at it, I beg you!

If I could voice a complaint at all, it would be that it feels like you are unfairly judging and hounding Kakashi and Sasuke. I could totally understand why you would do that, but it sort of seems bitter and one-dimensional, even after you've added Kakashi's voice, it could also just be me resistant-reading.

You brought virtual tears to my virtual eyes, thanks for giving people like me reason to continue trawling the web.
Amsuhl
2008-07-29
ch 5,
abuseAbout your writing style:

Ideas: Interesting and innovative
Characters: Both in character and awesome (Hard to do, in Naruto. Especially Naruto.)
Flow: Seamless
Words per chapter: Perfect. Just... perfect.
Status: What the hell are they doing, still in WIP mode?

Granted, I'd still be insanely happy if you just keep on writing, but... it's somewhat _sad_, you know, you have so many excellent stories and most of them are pretty long and none of them are completed, except for the oneshots or Karma.
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