Good story great lemon. happy for Sai. still think hes gay though

Awesome story best two shot i have ever read.

great story
-TR

really nice fic I loved the lemon keep writing more story's plz :3

aw this is just too cute!!

Hahaha! I got your message about reviewing and it totally guilt tripped me. I hadn't realized that I hadn't reviewed and then noticed a pattern: I haven't been reviewing very much at all of late.
Well: I loved the way this story led up to the... climax and the rather introspective nature of the telling. I haven't read many stories (on any couples) that are as well planned out as this one and that kept my interest till the end. Thank you, it was wonderful.

Good story, nice lemon (yes I'm a bit of a perv, but what man isn't). Excellent grammar. I'm impressed.

wow that was awsome i wish i could write a lemon that great for my next chapter for my story "DANGER LOVE" Itachi & Sakura story.

wow this story was amazing, i really enjoyed it. also the lemon was the best lemon i have ever read. ironic how a snow strom and sakura's curiosity lead them to finding true love within eachother.this is definitely one of my favorite stories. hope to read more of your stories.

i loved it; ir was aweome lol ^^

Wow. What can I say? This was alomst as good as mine. (Just kidding) This was an amazing romantic and sexy scene. Nothing like years of sexual frustration to build up the moment!

The fact that they are experienced brings an interesting point of view. You said right in your introduction the intent of the story, but I think some folks take their pairings very seriously and judged you based on that. Still, staying in character is important.

You say you write just for fun, and that may be so, but you really write at a professional level, so take it as a compliment when people judge you profesionally.

Because I understood your intent, the only thing that stood out about the characters this story is they act decidedly American (Or Western). They stray a bit I think from how they would act as part of the Japanese culture, but who cares? They act like Western versions of themselves and that's fine.

I like the stripping play, and once again your balance of point of view went smoothly. I wondered a bit if Sakura had kept her hair short or grown it out, but that minor detail was the only description that wasn't spot on. Everything was usueful to the story and the moment.

I have had er . . "fun" . . . reading this, and its easily a favorite.

I'm dancing in anticipation of the next chapter. What I like most about your story is your approach. As a writer you seem like a person who understands why people end relationships as well as start them. For Naruto and Sakura to have had relationships with just about everyone possible except each other accomplishes two things. It lets fans who have other favorite pairings hopefully get interested in the story, but it also helps explain why these two just seem meant for each other. This happens by hypothetically spelling out what would likely occur if other pairings in the story actually somehow happened. (Though you do whore poor Sakura out lol - just kidding)

As a writer you have shown you
A. Build up suspense and emotion very well
B. Can use a good balance of dialog and inner monologue to move a story
C. Smoothly transition point of view mid-chapter without confusion

I'm impressed!

I really liked it. I didn't see that many errors, which is a good thing. Also, your story had a plot... sorta. I mean, you set it up, which is always a good thing before you get to the actual lemon. A true PWP, I'm guessing, would be just that, them having sex with no plot. Although, I'd say it'd be poorly written, since a story with a plot is almost 99% better than one without. Anyway, I enjoyed it. You did a wonderful job of writing it, with details & so forth. Again, great job. Thanxs! :) :p ;)

that was a genius lemon u got my request right? narusakuino

not bad I give you a 6 of of 10