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Soujou
2009-11-01 . chapter 11
Way to go on the story!
I don't mind if your story takes a lot of time, or that you are too busy. As long as you update it then it's ok!
Most of the authors here takes an even longer time to update. At least you said that you can only promise a month one chapter, some takes a year for one chapter! (Including me)XP

Work hard!
minniemousemom
2009-10-10 . chapter 11
I love it LOVE IT very very good!
yumiyume
2009-10-07 . chapter 1
Nice chapter, though neji is an ** in this one. I wish there were more shino/tenten i like the pairing
Nikonplix
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
i love it so far, the same girl from livejournal!
please update soon,i love shino/tenten
Akira Nishikawa
2009-10-05 . chapter 11
omg !! you updated ^^ I'm so happy for that, but I felt this chapter so short for the long wait, anyways, it was a good one and I hope read more of this soon ^^.

XOXO
Akira
kinky-kitsune
2009-10-04 . chapter 11
omg, its been like forever since u updated! sakura is gonna kept it ain't she? i can wait to see the show down when neji gets those papers. update again soon =)
-xBrutalTragedyx-
2009-10-01 . chapter 10
Oh my god,please update soon!
BlAcKoNiX
2009-08-06 . chapter 2
i like just about everything about this story but y r u makeing sasuke give people nick names i always thought that ten-ten were related but y is he calling her tenny and hinata hina?
BlAcKoNiX
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
its not bad
AzariahEnigmos
2009-06-01 . chapter 10
Hey. um.. Yeah.. You should update soon. I'm eager for more ShinoTen
kinky-kitsune
2009-05-26 . chapter 10
um, now that is kinky...hehe ^_^ Update again soon
A True Albino Dragon
2009-04-10 . chapter 10
Oh no! You can't have Neji making up with Tenten! Once an arrogant manwhore, always an arrogant manwhore. (you can see how fond I am of him XD)
ANYWAYS! Good story! I think the plot is very interesting and can't wait for an update! I'm just wary about the threesome. How would Shino feel about it? Poor guy. Hope you update soon! I will be waiting.

~Albino Dragon
Black Rae of darkness
2009-03-01 . chapter 10
lol.

I noticed you accidently said that Tenten was Sasuke's sister. As an author it is not meant to offend you, rather to let you know the error is there. It was a short chapter but I enjoyed it still. Keep up the good work! ^-^
Black Rae of darkness
2009-03-01 . chapter 9
It seems a bit odd to request ten reveiws a chapter, I can see how they make you happy, but it seems a bit demanding.

None the less, here I am commenting because I was 'asked' too.

I like it thus far, it has still sparked my interest, it makes me wonder if this will have a good outcome.
Black Rae of darkness
2009-03-01 . chapter 8
Hell happy really really late birthday! ^-^

let the games begin! ^-^

I am enjoying this story, it is well written.
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