 r0gue lebeau 2008-04-15 . chapter 10_0 wow Doc I am impressed! Nice job! Especially when I know you were cringing the whole time :P Don't kill me but I enjoyed it! |
 Hikari Daeron 2008-04-15 . chapter 1Oh, oh I LOVED it. YES! Yes, I love it! This was extremely well-written/done. IC and all that. *discos* Great job, and good luck. I am SO close to voting for this, oh I love it. |
 Inu Kaiba 2008-04-15 . chapter 1I DON'T NEED TO SLEEP ROFL XD
Ah I loved this. No one's stuck to the show so far, and it's been so long since I saw it... mm this story is really good, you write so well. I thought Kaiba was really IC, and I would've liked to see an alternate ending where he ends up falling asleep in the chair. It wouldn't've been so OOC if it had creeped up on him. XD I like to consider myself THE KAIBA LOVER so :3 |
 pennypigeon 2008-04-15 . chapter 1i really love this, thhough i haven't got that far in the mange yet i have an idea from the dubed anime |
 Melanie Skye 2008-04-15 . chapter 1For the character that you usually write out-of-character, this is very nicely in character. I *heart* polarshipping as well. ^^ I like this quite a bit, it's very interesting.
Good luck with the contest! |
 kaixjouaddict 2008-04-14 . chapter 1For being your first SxK fic and disliking this pairing, it was very well done, also you stayed in character with both of them .^__^ and yes if Kaiba would have offered to stay it would have been EXTRIMLY OOC of him to do. |
 Salkiethia 2008-04-14 . chapter 1Hey, I thought it was great, and it appeases both the contest requirements and your inner polarship. Ne?
Fun fic, and I love how Kaiba's best insult is to call Jou a 'mediocrity'. It makes me smile, because we all know Kaiba is nothing if not severely above average. |