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Reviews for: The Day Kyle Slipped Away - Page 1 of 3
Cordelia Hartship
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
dude, i'm not trying to be a bitch but why in the hell would you write somthing this sad? its extreamly hard to make me cry and i was crying hard by the time i finished this. i mean its a great story but its so fucking sad! the end did make me a bit happier though. i think the saddest part was when he was looking at the picture and he thought he herd Kyle, then turned around and saw him for a split second. thats when my tears took off.
witchofdanight1316
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
Amazing. I cahn't even being to discribe it. i can literally FEEL the pain. Absolutly ASTOUNDING! I hope to read more from you in the future..:)

mariah
christycullen101
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Dear god, I have tears rolling down my face as I type this. This is the saddest one-shot I have EVER read. And the song makes it even more sadder. Your an amazing author if you can make me cry THIS much. Great work, buddy.
AllYourBaseAreBelongToKyle
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
I cry every time I read this one :)
Lyn
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
I'm cryingg ): this was soo good.
ilovesouthpark
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
i love this! i could not hold back the tears. it made me cry. u r awesome!
Alie
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
dude,this is awesome! it seriously made me cry! i didnt know words could make a person cry! good job!
Hydroleaf
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
*sniff* this is such a good fanfic... I love how you portrayed Stan as a depressed, young boy who doesn't understand why his friend, his super best friend, was given the misfortunes he received during his life. The dream and the funeral; the dialouge and scene itself was so strong and just seemed like the character's emotions were true to their personality. You showed a boy could care about his dying friend without his feelings constantly being matched up with slash romance! *pats B.B. on the back* You should be extremely proud of yourself~

I'd personally loathe Kyle dying in an episode of South Park, but this fic would be perfect for one. At the same time, this fic wouldn't be too good for an episode, because we love Kyle too much for him to depart from the show forever (unless a similar incident like Kenny's happens...) His character vastly affects the series and his ideas, thoughts, and personality molds the show into a beautiful statue. The lives of Kenny, Cartman, and Stan as well as the rest of people just won't be normal...

Anyway, if I wasn't a selfish, sluggish person myself, I'd write a letter to Matt Stone and Trey Parker about this story you made and beg them to spread it worldwide! ...What could a teenage girl do, though... "-~-
Da-awesum-squeeful-girl
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
I started reading South Park fanfics about a year ago, a year after I discovered Fanfiction, and did you know this was the first SP fanfic I ever read?(I think I got the link from that awesome Youtube Video XD)
And now since I've got a account, I can review it!
This is amazing...you could really feel Stan's emotions trhough the whole thing, and I felt tears in 'meh eyes, but I just managed to hold them back.
I loved the dream scene, and how things are going to be OK now.
Great fanfic! :)
InvaderSplee
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Omg, this was such a beautiful story! The dream sequence made me cry! Such a wonderful, sad, beautiful story! Spectacular job!!
Brown And Blue
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
Omg, this was so sad, but the very end was sweet.
This was an incredible story =] Good job!
BlackMistAlchemist
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
I love this story and the video that goes with it.This is the first story I read on it was a while ago but I remember.So this story means a lot to me because it was my first and made me love .You are my favorite writer at of everyone on this website.I love all your stories.You are a fantastic writing.So I thank you Ben Barrett.
the lie written in ink.
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
I can't even find words to describe how much this story touched me. I lost a friend close to me not too long ago, and this fit my feelings. Loneliness, regret, sadness...it fit perfectly. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I began crying, and the last line, 'things were going to be okay' really impacted me, because I also realized not long ago, that life goes on.

I really applaud you for this. Please keep up the amazing work. =)

love,
molly.
eda1102
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
oh boy... I couldn't read last lines due the tears which formed in my eyes when reading about the dream.

so emotional!! and when i was reading your comment at the beginning I knew it was gonna to be awesome becuz I remembered your "I do not love you" fic.. that one was amazing as well C:

But I didn't expect something like this. it really started as many other I already read about, kyle being dead and stan being emo about it... but the ending was so.. I dunno it gives you hope to read thing like this one :heart: really I love it!

faving!
eda
Snodin
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
Wow. I am in awe with this story. Everyone was in character, the moods were perfect, and the way you used flashbacks was just superb. I can tell you've been working hard on this, and that you're a very good writer. That makes me proud, as both a South Park fan AND an aspiring writer. You, my friend, have touched me with this fic. I'm sure if Matt and Trey ever got around to reading fanfics, this would HAVE to be on their list.

...I'm just wondering how the hell it took Kyle THAT long to finally get Stan to make peace with himself. lol
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