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Morgan Le Fay
2008-07-24
ch 10, anon.
abuseI think I'm psychic. Huh.

Keep up the good work and keep on writing. HINT. HINT.
Morgan Le Fay
2008-07-24
ch 9, anon.
abuseI have HAD it.

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!? I swear, this is one of the longest of waits, EVER. I even bookmarked the dang story!

Please hurry! This is an incredible story!

~Morgana
DRAMAMAMA
2008-07-23
ch 9, anon.
abusei like.
kaygirl38
2008-07-14
ch 9,
abuseYay!! i have no idea, but this may be my fave chapter, it's just halarious! I loved x10 olivia's sugar plum fairy thing! and billy and roy like ben 10! haha, so do i! uhh... well anyway, i absolutely LOVED THIS CHAPTER! it is my absolute fave, and the bestest ever! you need a prize! and i loved livvys and gabes little love thingy, i thought that was funny! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Jelly1029
2008-07-12
ch 9,
abuseWell, I hope this review can live up to your expectations! (And thanks for the mention, that makes *me* feel warm and fuzzy. =D)

I absolutely ADORED that part at the beginning. You are the only person I've met so far that can pull off that level of randomosity without sounding ridiculous. You sound geniusly hilarious.

So, yeah. Brilliant. Fabulous.

*rifles through thesaurus for better adjectives*
Cheers!
--Jelly1029
Saundersfamily007
2008-07-12
ch 9,
abuseWho... now I know why my brother called me something along the lines of "petite merde": Little shit. XD

Anyways, good update, and I can't wait for another! Ben?

Happy!Dedications? YES! THE BEST KIND OF DEDICATIONS!

XD Sorry, I'm a bit hyper right now.

M.E.
Storms-Are-My-Nature
2008-07-12
ch 9,
abuseOK, I just hope you get this review: My computer keeps on packing up and lots of e-mails and the like do not get through.
I like the exuberant Maisie, and the crazy Olivia. One question, though - how does Roy survive exploding?
Bens Back! *grins* Yippee!!
I would do a longer review, but I'm kinda stealing time on the computer here, so I need to be quick. So I just wanna say - Brilliant. And a bit more brilliant.
Tschuss!
R.e.d.L
2008-07-11
ch 9,
abusebest chapter yet, I'd say.
and-whao, that one guy just said Jo was a... a sue?!
...
ignore him.
That was one messed up freek, so keep on writing! Update!!
Mumu
2008-07-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseSorry to disappoint but the OC Jo is a complete Sue. Gorgeus? That is the first thing a Sue is. Has been paired with the hot-shot? Yes. All fall for her? Yes. Powerful? Yes. I;m sorry, it breaks my heart to tell you your OC is a Sue.
Allie108
2008-07-11
ch 9,
abusehahahaha i love it so far! its really funny, and my sister kept looking over at me, becasue i was actually laughing out loud! please update soon! i can't wait until u update next!
I n T e r V a l L i c
2008-07-11
ch 9,
abusePure. Genius.

It's just... amazing! I didn't even think of Ben coming into the picture! And now, looking back, I remember you writing that Ben was going to the seaside on a case with his parents!

This is AMAZING. I LOVE OLIVIA.

And Dagbert's fractured feet? You gotta love that.
candace
2008-07-11
ch 8, anon.
abusejo + tanc = hilarity!
i just love the I ORDER SOMEONE ELSE TO WRITE THIS PART
part. it's hilarious!
-Candace
candace Yay for Spider Pig!...
2008-07-11
ch 6, anon.
abuseomg, i love this chapter!
Yay for the Simpsons!
can't wait to read what's next!
^^
Candance
2008-07-11
ch 7, anon.
abuseBorlath.
it just has to be borlath!
i love how you word everything, and you give out clues, not the name straight away, on who he is!
now, the next chapter!!
Candace
2008-07-11
ch 5, anon.
abuseYep, its official.
i love jo.
And Tanc.
Wonderfully wonderful! ^^
All the fics out there in the CB section should be as long as this
(not complaining, since some short ones have been reallt good)
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