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Reviews For: A New Recruit

Riza-san 2008-07-09 ch 8,	abuseYay! Chapter 8! :) Yes, a little short. But that's fine. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
Riza-san 2008-07-03 ch 7,	abuseYou're welcome :) I can't wait until the next chapter. The suspense is killing me. Please update soon!
Riza-san 2008-06-24 ch 6,	abuseWow, good chapter! Ideas? Hm... I'm not that creativity, but I'll try. The UFO toy turns out to have some hidden camera in it and some controller starts spying on them and the Animorphs have to hunt him down. Melissa Chapman holds a birthday party and her dad tries to lead kids down to the basement for infestation. Oh, and Ax goes all hypo on red cordial. That'll be just funny. Terran and Rachel have some close-bonding experience and no longer dislike eachothers guts. The Yeerks take over Microsoft and manufacture dracom (Or whatever they are called) beams at twice the power of before. They also try and infest Bill Gates but the Animorphs save him. Well, thats enough of my crazy ideas. I love your story, keep updating :)
Riza-san 2008-06-19 ch 5,	abuseI like your fanfic XD Please update, I want to know who the guy in the golf cart is XD
xxtigergirlxx 2008-04-25 ch 3,	abuseits getting very good! but i do agree with squito... your story is a bit OOC. Especially the part abou the Animorphs LOOKING for a new recruit after JUST taking care of David... but that doesn't mean that I absolutely don't LOVE your story. Cuz I do! Update plees!! xxtgxx
Squito 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseI don't mean to shot you down, dude, but there is quite a bunch of OOC-ness in your story. The Animorphs have survived for so long by being secretive and paranoid. I don't they'd suddenly choose a new member right after the fiasco with David. And just because a person may seem to be a really good person, that doesn't mean he or she isn't secretively greedy or cruel--believe me, I know people like that. OC stories always have potential though, and I don't mean to be rude. You just might want to rethink how Terran met the Animorphs. Stumbled upon them? Family involved? Something like that. Anywho, good luck with your first fanfic!

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