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SweetestSin01
2008-06-12
ch 14,
abuseGlad that they defeat Krueger with no one else getting killed!
Darkness Takes Over
2008-06-02
ch 14,
abuseGood way to defeat Krueger - the group combining there powers together. Nice ending.
SweetestSin01
2008-05-31
ch 12,
abusePoor Joey! He lost both both his parents. I hope the rest can reach Kristen before Krueger can kill her since she is all alone.
Darkness Takes Over
2008-05-30
ch 12,
abuseOoh, is Kristen going to be next? I'm glad you've brought Max further into the story as I've always liked his character and plan on using him in my own story - if i ever get back to writing it that is lol. Well, anyway good chapter, can't wait to find out what happens to Kristen.
MysticGohan88
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseHi whats up? Sorry I didnt review earlier. This is a rewrite right? Well tell me this please...is rick gonna live? Cause i want to see a kickass battle between him and kruger and he survives. Also I have an idea for a finishing move. He shouts "SHADOW KICK" and leaps into te air into a flying side kick, and 5 afterimages trail behind him and the force is devastign. Just an idea. Contact me back and Update.
darkness takes over
2008-05-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseWoah, very good chapter. I felt so sad for Joey. :(
Windyfontaine
2008-05-26
ch 10,
abuseAhh, well hey, a grown up that is intelligent. Hope Max can convince the others. This is cool!

I have a request. Might sound evil, and I have nothing against your character, but if you're going to kill off another person can it be Sheila? There's just this Sheila that I know that has done some bad things to me and other friends of mine and to read about her death in a fic even if it's not really her would make me feel better :)

Um, not that I'm homicidal or anything, lol. And if you don't want to that's fine, your character is cool and I know you probably have a master plan. How about you create a hateful character named her for another fic and then kill her off? Maybe a Supernatural one and she gets eaten by a werewolf or something. Um, I'm really not bloodthirsty in real life...

Just that this person recently emailed me wanting to chat, and after all she's done it's like no way, and then I started catching up on your story and there is her name again.

Anywho, I really am enjoying this, and hope you have a great week and will look forward to the next chapter. Take it easy!
Windyfontaine
2008-05-26
ch 9,
abuseOh no, you're not going to kill Nancy! (Hurries to next chapter)
Windyfontaine
2008-05-26
ch 8,
abuseAww. But hey, the teacher actually seeing Krueger in action, so to speak, was kinda cool. On to the next chapter :)
Windyfontaine
2008-05-26
ch 7,
abuseOoh, guess Dan is going to get it. This is good! Going to read some more. Once I'm finally caught up with stuff I can write and post some of mine.
Windyfontaine
2008-05-26
ch 6,
abuseEw! Um, that was good though, lol. Guess he got his just desserts ;)
Windyfontaine
2008-05-26
ch 5,
abuseOh cliffy! Luckily I have a bunch of chapters to catch up with :)
SweetestSin01
2008-05-25
ch 10,
abuseWell atleast one parent think the Children is right. More Soon! Can you please Kill Dr Simms off! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Darkness Takes Over
2008-05-23
ch 9,
abuseVery good entertaining chapter. Joey's powers reminded me of Peter from the series Heroes. Good job.
SweetestSin01
2008-05-22
ch 9,
abuseGlad you wrote Max into this i liked him alot in Dream Warriors even though he might not know for a fact what was killing the children he did Care for them (More I can say for Simms) And how dare you leave this Chapter off like this! I hope Nancy is okay. More Soon Plz!
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