oh this is such a wonderfully written story n_n great job.

This fic is beautiful. Very, very well done!

Beautifully written.

Very sweet and moving. Great job!

Wow, that was fantastic...

The last line really pulled at me - "He doubted few, if any at all would ever even realize what his true greatest gift to them had been."

I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing (although reluctantly, lol.)

: )

How totally & endearingly sweet!

;-; Just two chapters?? Two cute, adorable, heart squeezing chapters? NO FAIR! óOò ::curls in a ball:: ú.u but well..

My congratulation on this absolutely beautifull fic. This made me smile and melt into a puddle of tenderness. God, Girl, you did a really good work here.

Here, You deserve a cookie!! n.n

TAKE CARE!!

MISAO-CG

PS: ::puppy eyes:: sequel perhaps??

That was truly wonderful. Thanks.

A very beautiful story. Heartfelt and truly moving. It was amazing to journey into the mind of Optimus and almost feel every feeling he had from time he brought the sparkling body to the Allspark, to his thoughts as the sparkling grows. You have real talent.