Ouch ouch ouch, that hurts the poor sensibilities, so good.
Great job.

That was lovely and incredibly sad... well done.

Loved it, as usual.

Very sad, but very, very lovely. I really enjoyed this.

You know, my dear, I wish so horribly that my "gold" would come out looking half as good as your supposed drivel.

I'm fairly certain that at this point, you could spit on a piece of paper and mail it to me and I'd think it was beautiful. Not to say that I'm easily entertained or awed; on the contrary, I'm saying that you need to stop being such a ninny and just accept the fact that your writing is amazing. Your repetition is poignant and fierce and your emotions are gruelingly real and I find both of those girls to be obnoxious in the books but I am intrigued by your words and your ideas.

So there.

you have writers block and yet came out with such an angsty yet awesome story. i love the descriptions/metaophors and those types of things used
your writing style is very different but very good, like how you repeat words and write as though the person is talking

angst, much? in both the story and the notes, too, it's almost funny. anyway, i did like this one - Lavender/Parvati is one of my secret favorite pairings, so yay!! and there was one line I really liked...*searches* ... "She had thought she could simply reach out and entwine their fingers and whisper to the sun: i'm yours and you're mine, and here is my happiness." So pretty! I love pretty things :) And for such a commonplace topic - in love with straight friend - the story seems really fresh and like it's the first time this has ever happened. (Because, for Parvati, it doesn't matter that this has happened to other people...she still has to deal with it for herself). Sad, but good! I rate this story does-not-totally-suck ;)

Mou, there-there, it wasn't too bad; I rather liked the idea and the way you wrote it. TAATTYDU isn't messing you up half as bad as you think it is.

In any case, good job!