Excellent story. A little short, but I think that's how I prefer them half the time.

I am kind of getting addicted to OLD fics and Mara X Urd.

I LOVED this story! short and sweet...very well written...hope you keep writing!

*nods head and claps* Good. Good job! You have won my approval. I usually don't like yuri. Not that I have anything against gays (I am a yaoi writer), it's just I don't find yuri as sexy as yaoi. But it was good. First, I love Urd. She's my favorite. Second, it was very light and I think it did the story well. Good job and keep it up!

Yours Forever Fanfictional

Gin

..."Urd" is one syllable.

Well, i just LOVED this story of yours! It's one of the best one-shot fanfics envolving Urd and Mara around... Are you planning on writting more about them? Please, I would be delighted to read them..
Congratulations for such a good story

ja ne

great hee silly senbei but ya gotta love him.I liked the way you kept the conversation between mara and her mirror self.

Pretty good, Pretty cute.

Any more?

sequel1!

I liked it _ Mostly because my name is Mara and any anime with me in it is just..wonderful. Great job! *sits there giddily*

Thats so cute! i always thought they should be together when i took like five mangas from a boy i know and read TDOMU. they were just so cute when they sang together! anyway write more of all your stories! Ja

So what are they both lesbos is that what you're saying, shiiiver, i really need to know, well besides the fact that they were bothe girls it was a good fic

Hiya. Liked it a lot! When I read the 'Devil in Miss Urd' I thought along much the same lines as to the two advisaries' pasts. Good fic; nicely descriptive, nicely timed.

well written and very interesting! I'd luv to see more urd/mara fics coming from you in the future. You've convinced me...they make a great couple!

Neat fan fic maybe urd can leave keiichi alone a bit now.