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| SnappytheCroconaw 2008-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseThis story is great! The end was the cutest part, when he says that she belongs close to his heart. Adorable pairng, I've never seen one quite like it, but like GoldenRaptor says it's quite the unique pairng and there should be more like it. I agree to that there needs to be a little more originality around here. Kudos to you! |
| GoldenRaptor 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG, this story was awesome! I'd never seen a TimeAurashipping, but it's cool really cool. People should create mre unique shippings like this. I mean, shippings like Phoenixshipping are great, but you see them all the time! Great shipping, amazing story. |
| Meriah 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful. Far too many Dialga fics are humorous and out-of-character, yet you chose to focus on Dialga in a higher aspect. To me, he (she?) is not different from the one on the 11th movie, but rather his personality is being examined from an alternative view. In addition, I liked the words you used for this. They all flowed together. Good job! |
| Devi Serene 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThat is so beautiful. I could tell that Dialga had changed from being a more destructive mon (from the movies) to a compassionate one. Great job. |
| Nefertili 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThat's a nice one especially considering that you don't do first-person POVs often. Great portrayal of the Guardian of Time! The Dialga speaking in your story is worlds above the creature as portrayed by the Pokemon anime, and I have to say that the way he expresses his concern for Shan is a good change from all that violence. |
| Thoughtless7 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was so sad! :( I always hated that place, especially when I had to fight my Gyarados. But the ending was very sweet. :3 Great one-shot! |