 Tera Hunter 2009-10-07 . chapter 1O.O
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...What?
Bermuda triangle or something? Aliens? O.O
...I just fell out of my seat. I thought they only did that in movies.
...PLEASE tell me you'll update this. I am hooked. Please? Please? |
 Hiding In My Writing 2009-10-02 . chapter 1The Triangle! Oh man that was intense. By the time it was over I was leaning up close to the screen! Hey who was that voice anyway? Curiosity is screaming at me.
By the way! That was awesome! |
 Uniasus 2009-10-01 . chapter 1Um...where's the rest?! I was kinda appalled to see that this was complete and there would be now understanding of what happened, but seeing as its the Bermuda Triangle I guess I can understand. Still, talk about a cliffhanger! |
 Eliza Acheron 2009-09-26 . chapter 1 Oh wow! That was so awesome! SUSPENSE!! You wrote that really well- poor Starscream!
Good work, very exciting story.
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 Illusion-Factory 2009-09-17 . chapter 1That would be one for the bermuda triangle. Even alien species shouldn't underestimate the power of folk tales. |
 sphinx01 2009-09-06 . chapter 1Oh my god, this was just cool, creepy and funny all at once. Really great work.
Have you considered re-writing the story from Starscream's POV? I'd be forever thankful!
Thanks very much for sharing! |
 Lithium Butterfly 2009-09-05 . chapter 1Absolutely chilling. The fact that nothing is explained to the reader makes it all the more so. Without all the foreshadowing and extra information that authors usually provide, the events are as strange and shocking to us as to the characters, leaving us just as confused and terrified.
That alone puts this fic a level (or two, or three, or...seventy two ^_~) above the average horror story. The way you build plot and suspense while keeping the characters and situations utterly believable is excellent. Starscream's panic and the various Decepticons' (and Prime's) reactions were perfect.
As unsettling and impactful as it is skillfully written. This is going on my list of favorites. Kudos for keeping me awake all night with thoughts of inhuman voices counting down and static where it shouldn't be. |
 Jessi Tsuki 2009-09-03 . chapter 1Spooky but it was well written for sure. Bermuda Triangle? I figured that early on. XD |
 Queen of the Red Skittle 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Oh, creepy! Very well done - love the suspense!
"Dead air."
*gleeful shudder*
QOTRS~ |
 Rexel Number 5 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Dude, I love this story. He's in the Bermuda Triangle, right? |
 John Smith 2009-07-09 . chapter 1WOWOWOWOW! I absolutely ADORE this story. It's so fabulously written.. I've read it through about 5 times since I found it yesterday, and it still makes my heart beat toward the end.. it's so intense!
The more I read it, the more I appreciate the writing in it as well, specifically the eerie and really quite terrifying descriptions of the static rising and falling, consuming everything until that last moment, when everything went dead.
I also absolutely LOVE how no mention was made of the Bermuda Triangle throughout the duration, leaving it to the reader to figure it out during, or more than likely after finishing.
I love me some Starscream and Megatron, but only when they're in character, and holy CRAP were they perfect in this story. LOL "Starscream is always disturbed" gave me a good chuckle, those two are always going back and forth with such banter. Starscream's panic toward the end is not only in character, but also not at all laughable, even though it's hard to achieve that with him... very hard. I loved him yelling "One one one one!" in a panic, as though he just couldn't take the suspense and wanted it all to be over.
E so good! This is my all time favorite Transformers fanfiction I've ever read, for its simplicity, mood, superb writing, and emotional stimulation. |
 Wol Lo 2009-06-19 . chapter 1'Kay. This is scary. Starscream was in the bermuda triangle, right? And he's gone. That's really creepy. Slag. |
 Grey Grapevines 2009-05-20 . chapter 1How disturbing... But I like it. |
 Dragon260 2009-04-11 . chapter 1*stares at the screen, mouth covered, with an "Holy Sh*t" expression* ...That...was creepy as heck... |
 Sekhem 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Huh. Been a long time since I've read anything about the Bermuda Triangle. Well done, especially since the Transformers wouldn't know the legends about that area.
I especially like the part about the voice counting down. It gave it a particularly eerie touch. When I went back and reread it, it gave me chills.
By the way, have you considered writing a second part to this, from the Autobots' point of view?
Keep up the good work.
Sekhem |