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Tera Hunter
2009-10-07 . chapter 1
O.O
O.O
O.O
...What?
Bermuda triangle or something? Aliens? O.O
...I just fell out of my seat. I thought they only did that in movies.
...PLEASE tell me you'll update this. I am hooked. Please? Please?
Hiding In My Writing
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
The Triangle! Oh man that was intense. By the time it was over I was leaning up close to the screen! Hey who was that voice anyway? Curiosity is screaming at me.

By the way! That was awesome!
Uniasus
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
Um...where's the rest?! I was kinda appalled to see that this was complete and there would be now understanding of what happened, but seeing as its the Bermuda Triangle I guess I can understand. Still, talk about a cliffhanger!
Eliza Acheron
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
Oh wow! That was so awesome! SUSPENSE!! You wrote that really well- poor Starscream!
Good work, very exciting story.
: )
Illusion-Factory
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
That would be one for the bermuda triangle. Even alien species shouldn't underestimate the power of folk tales.
sphinx01
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Oh my god, this was just cool, creepy and funny all at once. Really great work.
Have you considered re-writing the story from Starscream's POV? I'd be forever thankful!
Thanks very much for sharing!
Lithium Butterfly
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
Absolutely chilling. The fact that nothing is explained to the reader makes it all the more so. Without all the foreshadowing and extra information that authors usually provide, the events are as strange and shocking to us as to the characters, leaving us just as confused and terrified.

That alone puts this fic a level (or two, or three, or...seventy two ^_~) above the average horror story. The way you build plot and suspense while keeping the characters and situations utterly believable is excellent. Starscream's panic and the various Decepticons' (and Prime's) reactions were perfect.

As unsettling and impactful as it is skillfully written. This is going on my list of favorites. Kudos for keeping me awake all night with thoughts of inhuman voices counting down and static where it shouldn't be.
Jessi Tsuki
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Spooky but it was well written for sure. Bermuda Triangle? I figured that early on. XD
Queen of the Red Skittle
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
Oh, creepy! Very well done - love the suspense!

"Dead air."

*gleeful shudder*

QOTRS~
Rexel Number 5
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Dude, I love this story. He's in the Bermuda Triangle, right?
John Smith
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
WOWOWOWOW! I absolutely ADORE this story. It's so fabulously written.. I've read it through about 5 times since I found it yesterday, and it still makes my heart beat toward the end.. it's so intense!

The more I read it, the more I appreciate the writing in it as well, specifically the eerie and really quite terrifying descriptions of the static rising and falling, consuming everything until that last moment, when everything went dead.

I also absolutely LOVE how no mention was made of the Bermuda Triangle throughout the duration, leaving it to the reader to figure it out during, or more than likely after finishing.

I love me some Starscream and Megatron, but only when they're in character, and holy CRAP were they perfect in this story. LOL "Starscream is always disturbed" gave me a good chuckle, those two are always going back and forth with such banter. Starscream's panic toward the end is not only in character, but also not at all laughable, even though it's hard to achieve that with him... very hard. I loved him yelling "One one one one!" in a panic, as though he just couldn't take the suspense and wanted it all to be over.

E so good! This is my all time favorite Transformers fanfiction I've ever read, for its simplicity, mood, superb writing, and emotional stimulation.
Wol Lo
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
'Kay. This is scary. Starscream was in the bermuda triangle, right? And he's gone. That's really creepy. Slag.
Grey Grapevines
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
How disturbing... But I like it.
Dragon260
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
*stares at the screen, mouth covered, with an "Holy Sh*t" expression* ...That...was creepy as heck...
Sekhem
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
Huh. Been a long time since I've read anything about the Bermuda Triangle. Well done, especially since the Transformers wouldn't know the legends about that area.

I especially like the part about the voice counting down. It gave it a particularly eerie touch. When I went back and reread it, it gave me chills.

By the way, have you considered writing a second part to this, from the Autobots' point of view?

Keep up the good work.

Sekhem
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