Quite unusual. a bit of a more feral interpretation of Stranger, but then I've not played the game in years, so it could very well make sense.

Please, please update, this is one of the best oddworld fanfics ever!

Feoa - Portuguese?

Well then, I think the language Feoa's name came from is Spanish. For males it would be feo and for females it would be...I forgot...I think it may be fea *sweatdrop*. But it means ugly.
And if I do win this contest, what is my limitation for making this character?
And I agree with you so far about Feoa. She's captative by her family, bullies, herself, and Stranger as of now. n.n

You finally updated! Great chapter and please update again soon.

What contest?
By the way, I like the chapter. Poor Spade, her secret was revealed, and now Stranger is holding her hostage in a way.

a native American dialect

FEOA=UGLY

At least she has some good things out of her life

Still loving the fic. Waiting for more interaction with stranger.

Way ta go Spade...things just don't go right with you, huh.
Hope you can get your bounty back...

Hey, this is cool, keep going.

I'm loving the story so far. Your writting style is good and i hope you update soon.:)

Okay, so I sent you a message about this, but i'm not sure it went through, so here it is again.
The site is oddworldforums dot net. It has friendly members and a special section for fanfiction, which is where I post all my oddworld stuff. I hope you join. I know more people would read it on an actual oddworld site.

(all one word) odd world forums dot net

Love it! This is really a great fic; can't wait to hear more!

But I have to say, if you really want people to read it, you might want to consider putting it on . There's a section there where you can post all oddworld fanfiction to recieve more feedback.

Anywho, keep typin'! I wanna here more!