LUVED IT!

lol that was cooler than the first one. and you even matched most of the characters with their counterparts.

this is so awsome!

This is getting interesting, and unorthodox

Dude you need to re think this... First Try not to use script format, You should also give so back story to what your doing. Why Is Ranma Inuyasha?

Something like that should be part of this.

You shuld also read alot of Fanfictions who have alot of reveiws.

I hope this helps