This is a very good story, pure and simple. However, it seems a bit short. Maybe you could add just one more chapter, like the battle scene with ridley and pikachu unleashing the ultimate thunderbolt, saving Samus! That would be so perfect. Oh, and by the way, I was NOT crying when she put her suit on. (*sniffles*)

Nice story. Pikachu and Samus make a great, if not somewhat unusual, team. It's nice to see the lone wolf fighting with someone else for a change. I also like the scene where Samus looks at Pika through her visor, too.

aw. Samus is a lone wolf but working together with pikachu is so cute.

Yeay! Another Samus/Pikachu friendship fic. These two are cute, I gotta say.
Samus, Ms. Lone Wolf herself, has found herself with a new friend in the shape of a little yellow rat. LOLZ! Wonder what she thought of her new ally...
That they look out for each other, and protect each other, is sweet. They make a good team.
Thanks for posting this. Non-talky Pikachu owns! Keep writing.

Liz

EXCELLENT! A perfect example on how Brawl brings people closer together ^ ^

I just couldn't leave without a giving a review. This is very well written. Your descriptions and characters are spot on. This section needs more writers like you..I look forward to reading more from you :)

Aw! Poor Pikachu; the scene where he's trapped in the power generator is one of the saddest... But I really liked your story.

Your stories are great. I wouldn't mind if you made a Subspace parody story, as the way you desrcibe things would be great. (and no, I did not cry when she put her suit back on. I was actually glad. I played SSE on hard, and was having a tough time playing as ZSS.)

Also, wouldn't Samus know of Pikachu's powers from the other tournaments (SSB, SSBM)?

Ciao! (I admire your stories, by the way)

Awesome, this was nicely done. :) Your characterization of Pikachu and Samus are right on. They are a rather strange pair, don't you think? I'm actually working on a one-shot based on these two to go along with my other two SSBB stories. Hm, but seeing that you have done it first, I think I'll have to reconsider. Lol.

Again, good job and keep writing!