This is spectacular; I love the way you subtly play with emotions until the climax at the end.

Well done!

wow! that was really good... is this a one-shot or a multi-chapter story??

I really like this story, can't wait to read more!

That was pretty F'ing emotional. i'm glad someone is filling in the gaps of time in between Live to Tell and Bust A Move, and what happens afterwards. can't wait to see what you write next