Oh my goodness that was creepy and addictive and so compelling. You can see it and see the steady descent and their weird twisted love. So wonderful.

This was amazing! I think that we both need therapy though... You for writing it and me for absolutely loving it and not being horrified XD

You've just made my day.

WOW. amazing like always. Loving your writing. if only there were more updates xD For anything, a new story, a little idea. It's all good. Anyhow, thanks for being so awesome.

What a distrubing, yet brilliant story. Two thumbs!

Holy shit...Man, I can honestly say that I don't get bothered by much but damn, reading this made me cringe and my throat dry uncomfortably. It was kind of disturbing but after saying that, it was fantastically dark (and I love dark things). Just, Fantastic job on this.

Inumaru12

aweomse, creepy, AMAZING :3

I loved this :D

Great story! :3

Love how you had all the detail... and stuff. .; I kinda skimmed through some parts, but I like the overall gist of things. Thank you!

This is...disturbing beyond all belief.

Delightfully frightening. Really liked the way that you wrote the entire piece – characters, situations, everything.

Wow. Just, wow.

Brilliantly written, this story has left me aghast at what happened. Amazing one-shot.

-Artemis

Wow. This is brilliant... and disgusting. It's really interesting though, and quite well written. All in all it makes a rather good read.

Also, I think you need help somehow if you can write something like this.

Wow. Very good story. Really, really sick, but-it was perfectly done. I think I'm torn between absolute horror that someone could come up with something like this and the desperate need to congratulate you for making me get so worked up about a story. I'll have nightmares tonight, that's for sure.

Not that I'm criticizing: You did a fantastic job with this piece. It's not even as sick as some of the other stories under the category of "horror", but the psychology to it, well...

I think the "Mary's body" part was your best. It really is disturbing to think of how many people we're educating on how to get rid of bodies when we put documentaries on TV. One of those 'oops' moments.

Anyway, very good job.

Riddle

this is and very interesting and unique oneshot you got 'ere.

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THIS WAS AMAZING. I do wish it went on for more, but I really don't know what you could do with it. The last line was amazing though! I love how it was meant to be confusing for the adults, but to us, and Harry, it made perfect sense, in the most ridiculous way. It was all around amazing! Great job!