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| crazylove06 2008-07-22 ch 11,  | abuseI'm so glad you updated. And wow this was hot, in a club up against a wall. Interesting comment Michelle made at the end, is she wanting to turn herself, or maybe just an instinct of the moment. |
| smilingchica 2008-06-28 ch 9, | abusewhat can I saw, I love it!! And Angela was portrayed so cute. And having Kim be a vampire was cool too. I can't wait till the next chapter! I wish I had my own Tony vampire ;) |
| crazylove06 2008-06-25 ch 10, | abuseThe little gril was really cute, and it was swwet the way Tony acted around her. The little jokes about loving him for his money were really cute |
| Angel's babe 2008-06-06 ch 9, | abuse"I'll tell ya all about it, after I talk to Jack." That's a priceless way to end a chapter. I can't wait to see what Jack's like. -AB |
| crazylove06 2008-06-04 ch 9, | abuseWow that was really hot, I loved the nails on his back. And Jack coming should be interesting. Oh as a side note, I don't think some people know the "M" rated section is seperate, like you have to click on it to see the story, just a thought. Great update! |
| Angel's babe 2008-06-01 ch 8, | abuseThe story is really good. It's a very unique idea fusing Moonlight with 24. I'm very intrigued and can't wait to see where you take this. |
| crazylove06 2008-05-28 ch 8, | abuseWow where to begin. First I have to say the mentions of them being together, just not in this life peaked my curiosity of them in a previous life together, maybe one where she died or something. Just seemed like from them feeling like they've loved each other forever... I love the I love you's from them, it was so sweet. The love making was very passioante and fiery. Great job! |
| smilingchica 2008-05-26 ch 7, | abuseaaw... I've been waiting for this chapter to go up. You never disappoint. |
| crazylove06 2008-05-26 ch 7, | abuseHey, sorry i was on vacation so I couldn't review. Tjis chapter was great, we got to learn moe about the characters and vamps, and I loved the kiss! |
| tm24 2008-05-26 ch 7, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story! I love the plot and can't wait to see where it goes! And I'm absolutely loving this Tony/Michelle stuff!! Great job and can't wait to read the next chapter :) |
| Reikofanfan 2008-05-26 ch 7, | abuseI love the tension between them, Michelle's definately strong willed. Can't wait for more! |
| bubbletea4me 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseOMG bloody brilliant write more like now i thought the whole 24 /vampire thing was realy weird but you have done more than pull it off 24 should be like this fantastic, keep going! |
| phoenix546 2008-05-19 ch 6, | abuseSo. Next chapter please! Loving this story. Loving everything about it. |
| chipsnopotatoes 2008-05-11 ch 6, | abuseso appropriate to have nina as a vampire. as for the ending of this chapter, wow! i love how he's so conflicted about feeding off of her. |
| Reikofanfan 2008-05-11 ch 6, | abusepoor Michelle, but he had to do it. I love the tension between them, they finally kissed! |