Fluff, action, and some drama tossed in for interest. You handle the mix well while keeping the characters from getting too ooc, good on you.

Have I mentioned that I adore your Zaraki? He's unfortunately not often a central figure in these types of fics, but every mention of him makes me happy. I fell in love with his character early and irrevocably, and he remains as my favorite Bleach character... Does it say something about me that I hold such affection for the maniacal devil?

;) You do his character justice - I really like this intuitive and unrepentant Kenpachi.

On to the next chapter!

Łove

OH my gosh!

...you don't like Hitsugaya?

this could be like an anti- bleach ...it's so nice and different

and no hinamori... sighs... great story though. :(

hinamori? please? get her to aizen? so she can have peace and stuff?

you could have included hinamori... sighs...

i mean aizen is her world and she and izuru are real close...

and i hate hitsugaya... haha... it would break his cold heart

im a guy...

but man, you are good... you portrayed what a guy will feel through this... ( though, its a boy boy thing)...

wew...

im not a fan of boy boy stuff but you are different from others. you dont write porn, you write a story and porn (IMO)... and that for me is genius!

this story is deep... starting to love Gin

I want to see Karin & Yuzu meeting Gin. Badly.

You are AMAZING! This fic is AMAZING! Someone's been watching/reading Fruits Baskets haven't they... As soon as I read the word Shigure I immediately though of him.

Thank You again this was amazing

There needs to be MORE GinIchi out there! DX

I had a lot of fun reading this, and it made a lot of sense.

I saw the title of this and was instantly reminded of a poem. It's a villanelle called The Art of Losing, and the line repeated the most is 'The art of losing isn't hard to master' and the other repeating line changes every time (it's not a true-true villanelle) but has something to do with it being a disaster.