Reviews for Runaways Remix: Pride and Joy

vine 2008-07-08 ch 2,	abuseHey, pretty sweet idea! I hope you follow through with this, because so many RA fics have been shoved to the wayside. And yours has real promise. :)
Elihu 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseIt is obvious that you did it on purpose. The problem with this SLIGHTLY alternate universe is that the SLIGHT makes no difference. The OC contributes nothing new or bearable. It amounts to just the author (also named Jake) putting himself in the story. Constructive criticism over.
Elihu 2008-07-05 ch 2,	abuseThere's no substance. We already know all of the plot since its identical to the comic. The dialogue is ripped directly word-for-word. The original character feels like a burden; he adds mildly annoying, unfunny lines to the original jokes of the comic and really comes off as a self-insert.
avatarfanatic280 2008-06-23 ch 2,	abuseYay1 Old Lace! Hey, I can see that Jake and Karolina like each other, what happens with Xavin? Or do I have to... (dun dun dun...) wait? -shudders- Then again, I suppose my readers have to wait for my updates. I think I will go work on my fics... -mumbling to self-
avatarfanatic280 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuseVery, very good... when is the next chapter coming? If the rest of it is as good as this, you should re-write the entire series! I give it an... uh... 6 out of... 5!