It was 'k', you tried too hard to make it Bella, and that kinda messed it up though.

All in all, pretty good.

omg that is actual amazin, but really sad

aww, so sad ...

but i like it :) it's real and easy to read.

it's not fluffy or pathetic or boring, it's good.

*keep writing*

:* :* :*

OH OH OH OH OH! So sad! But great!

i love the poem it relates to bella so much really well written!

That was amazing my friend. Beautiful. It was Beautiful and Dark. Loved it.

How beautifully sad.

Wonderfully written, if I do say so myself.

Very melancholy from someone called joyful-soul3! Very good in my opinion.

peace&love

Liv