I don't suppose you have any plans to explore this story a little more, do you?

IT was a pretty kick-* story.

aw, sort of a sad ending there
feels a bit unfinished, but w/e ^_^
loved the Chlana bits ^_^

Engaging story. It was somewhat implausible at points, but there were some strong witty moments that compensated nicely. Your characters were a bit on and off, I think Lois could have been a stronger character, but the parts that were insightful were very well done.
!Zil!

I really enjoyed this story, I found it well written and very engaging. Although I am confused by one thing - the ending seemed quite abrupt, yet the story is marked "Complete". Does that mean there's a sequel on the drawing board?

Thanks for a great story ^_^