Nice fanfic! There's one question though: it said at the beginning that "my grandpa can make one of those with his eyes". Isn't her grandpa either Hades, Alfred, or Thomas Wayne? And, if it was Clark she was referring to, wouldn't it be Uncle?

that was ridiculously cute =D

Very cute. I enjoyed reading it.

That was adorable! Wonderfully in character and well written. Fabulous job ;)

I actually initially read this before the truth and justice series, but having trawled through the mass of fanfiction and found you again, I read the actual series. It's in character and excellent. I've been doing some thinking, and I've come to the conclusion that you're stories are so good, because of the way you write your characters. This is really rare, especially in comics, because people tend to get over excited with characterisation, and end up needlessly exaggurating their personalies or characteristics. Your stories are so excellent, because your characters are human. They exhibit their flaws, and the main characters are developed and interesting, without having black and white personalites. I like the fact that you focused on the problems of the age difference, and took time to build up the backstory and emotional tension - the stories really benefited from it! Similarly, Bruce and Martha are dealt with extremely well, but your characterisation is beautiful across the board - I wasn't only reading the story for the main pairing by the end - I got really involved in the group dynamic of the whole league, especially Roy, Lian and Midori. You played the romance between Midori and Roy just right, and when she finally came back to him it was all the sweeter! Gah, I loved it. Clark and Lois, and the inclusion of the extended Robin families were superb, and I enjoyed the humourous inclusion of Clay. I particularly admire the fact that you made him 'normal' and had him looking up to Clark instead of his persona, it was really endearing. Your characterisation of Harvey was brilliant, and the reveal of Martha's secret identity made me do a little happy dance. Basically, you've wrote what has become my favourite Batman fanfiction series to date, and I'd just like to say one thing. Please don't stop!

- MissMorose

>The oddness of this qualification alone made the principal question what life at Wayne Manor involved for the children of the once-infamous playboy. Jordan’s parents had brought a younger child, a boy, along with them to her kindergarten orientation. McCarthy wondered if the toddler was a would-be ninja, too.<

*chuckles*
"would-be ninjas", how cute!

They're a mischievous bunch in the Bat Clan.
Keeping things from Super Mama, naughty.

*applauds author for a wonderful storyline* :)
Took a bit longer than I wanted though, I had to stop reading every now and then to make food and other pesky stuff like that, humanoid offspring must have its daily food source stuff etc after all ;)

I have only skimmed "Truth and Justice", but took time to read through this delightful story - I'll be reading the entire truth and justice saga soon.
In the meantime - BRAVO!! I Loved it! I can just see how Bruce Wayne would be proud of his young student/daughter able to handle herself. I also am certain that the bangle contains some substance to keep the elbow smash to the head from being a decapitation! (Yes, I did figure out who Jordan's Grandpa is!)
As the father of a precocious daughter, and grandaughter (same line) - I was just heart-warmed by this story!
Well Told! Well worth reading!
Kudos
'nuff said

This is an amazing fiction novel! I read the whole trilogy in just 4 days and I can't believe I was hooked. It so unique and it read like a novel. It has everything from drama/adventure/romance/tragedy/etc. and multiple pairings but most unique is most of them all is our starcrossed lovers batman and superwoman(your version of supergirl). What is so unique also is that I havent read any batman/supergirl pairing fic out there. Making your fic maybe the first and only one.

A piece of advise. Try reposting this on the Comics DC Superheroes or Cartoons Justice League fanfiction sections.

You will get more readers for this amazing fic!

That's so cute!

*gives cookie*

This was way too adorable. I loved it.

I like their logic.

Haha, that was hilarious! I loved it!

*squeals at the cuteness* Oh! Love that. He's so sweet with his daughter, and she's so cool!

How absolutely adorable! I love the thought of Bruce interacting with his daughter so well. But, I can't decide if she's more like her dad or mom. Either way, Jordan's an absolute cutie.

Sorry that it took me forever to get to this one. Life's a pain in the bum!

=]

Love it!

This was so cute! =)