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| Cheshire 2008-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's so cute! *gives cookie* |
| Mixy Lang 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was way too adorable. I loved it. |
| IVIaedhros 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI like their logic. |
| PeaceGuardian 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that was hilarious! I loved it! |
| Samantha-san13 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuse*squeals at the cuteness* Oh! Love that. He's so sweet with his daughter, and she's so cool! |
| LifeBringsMeOnlyTears 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHow absolutely adorable! I love the thought of Bruce interacting with his daughter so well. But, I can't decide if she's more like her dad or mom. Either way, Jordan's an absolute cutie. Sorry that it took me forever to get to this one. Life's a pain in the bum! =] Love it! |
| mysterious works for me 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was so cute! =) |
| Alelou 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseVery cute and well-written. And I guess if you're Batman you might indeed have good reason to teach your daughter to ignore the principal. |
| SarahC4321 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're so amazing! I'm going to miss your stories. PLEASE find a way to keep it going, even if it's a weird tangent or something. Please! |
| batfan7 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL! That was so cute! I think I want a Jordan of my own ;-) Okay, maybe not, but she was definitly adorable. It's a good thing that most adults take what young children say with a grain of salt. Grandpas who can carve letters with their eyes are a bit hard to find, after all. Thanks for the wonderful insight into Bruce and Martha's future! It's looking like they're going to have all sorts of new adventures as parents. And from what you've shown us here, they're doing a fantastic job. If you feel the need to write a bit more with these characters in the future, I'm sure I could be persuaded to read! :-D |
| GothikStrawberry 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Jordan is too cute. But with those parents (and grandparents) how could she not be. :) And of course I just adored the little exchange between her and her Dad. It made me smile. Thanks for PMing me. :) I know this was meant as a one-shot, but I would really like to read more about Jordan ... so if you find the time and the inspiration to write something PLEASE let me know. Or even better yet ... I'm going to put you on my author alert list. :) And I'm glad my reviews made you feel good, but you deserved it. And I have to admit I'm a little envious at time ... though mostly I'm just thrilled to read such a fabulous piece of fanfiction like this. Anyhoo, beautifully done. And I'm hoping for more. *puppy-dog-eyes* |
| DCU-luva 2008-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is such a sweet slice-of-life in the post-warrior life of a reitired Batman. I can just see him teaching his little girl to fight - and spoiling her over ice cream while not gushing over her or doing anything un-batlike. I'll bet her brother is a ninja-to-be! I'm curious about the other stories. Will have to check them out. |
| CalypsoHunter 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusethat was good. i still think you should do another story envolving all the other charactors. i would love to read more. if you have any advice on my own, going-nowhere-Batman Story, please give it to me. i'm stuck in a deep dark hole with no way out. keep writing. Calypso |
| Samantha Selman 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really cute! I can totally picture him doing that! You did a fantabulous job! Sammie! :D |
| kim 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI adored this! I was extreamly excited to see you had followed your 'Truth and Justice 'verse' with a ficlet. Little Jordan will e a force to be reconed with. I hope more snippets of this future AU comes to you. -Gottaluvit |