AH!

Loved it!

Can't wait till next week.

Lovely chapter. I especially liked the ending. And the way you write Shireen makes me like her, and if possible I love Mickey even more because of this little tale. Just everything about it is wonderful.

Nice segue. Very smooth transition. Brilliant bit of puttering about to bring us back to the core narrative. You've set the stage, lit the fuse... Next chapter promises to be quite the reminder of the rating. Carry on. ;-)

Updates are good.

Now all Rose has to do is tell him to shag her.

Wo! Next week can't come fast enough!

One of the parts of this chapter that I like so much is the look we get into Colonel Mace's mind. The fact that he has to deal with and later reprimand an amnesiatic version of the alien that he has been in awe of his entire life. Who he has heard stories of The Doctor saving the Earth an innumerable amount of times. The reprimanding itself was hilarious. It was brilliant seeing Joshua in that position.

I can't wait to see Rose's reaction to what he did. Actually I can't wait for everybody's reaction to what he did. I can hear Jackie now, 'that bloody arsonist maniac is trying to run off with my daughter!' *grins*

I'm so glad the first thing Joshua did when it was all over, was to call Rose. At least he realized that she'd be frantic after getting his message. I hope they get to be together in the next chapter. They both deserve it.

WOW! Just WOW! This is awesome, lol I hope they get to use a wall, or a tree or any other rigid virtical surface available verry verry soon, lol!

Great chapter again.

Thanks for setting me straight on Sherry. I like how you put in little titbits on the series we know and love. It's a shame that Joshua won't be able to blow up Hendricks but at least he seems to be a lot better than when he went to rehab.

I do wonder how you are going to bring the Doctor back, and can't wait to find out.

: cheers :

Colonel Mace! And apparently not dead Jenkins! I love them!

Actually, I loved every scene with Joshua and Mace and his men - absolutely hysterical.

Also, kudos to the Doctor! He gets one free second after offing Bubbles and blowing up a hospital, and he calls Rose! What a wise boyfriend...

This chapter was so much fun to read! There were several places, like when the colonel wandered off to find someone who'd listen to him, where I just had to pause because the line was so good and so well placed and did such a good job of defining a whole chunk in just a small space. I loved the chapter before, too, even though I didn't review, and I can't wait for the next one. Well, obviously I can, I don't have a choice, but...you know what I mean. You have this habit of posting while *I'm* teaching and I'll have to repress doing a little dance and dropping everything, giving my students busy work, and sitting down to read it right then. _

Very exciting! Oh lizards ... they always try to steal other planets. Did you watch that kitschy movie where lizards wore people skin ... what was that movie called ... sigh

Whoohoo! Alien threat de-stroyed! Fantastic chapter, I think I held my breath through half of it. I was scared you were gonna kill one of the rehab-people and I love them so, it would have broken my heart!

Now we just need Joshua back in London. To snuggle Rose.

Definitely in my top five Who fics! Love the premise and can't wait to read more.

Brilliant blood brilliant! I love the Doctor in full force overdrive and I can't tell you how much fun it is to see that Joshua has finally rediscovered how wonderful it is to be alive and helping people. I just hope that he can hold it together when he gets the rest of his memories back. But then that's what Rose is there for to help hold him together when he does finally come back to being himself. Lovely lovely action scenes I could so see him dashing around like a the lovely nut he is, shifting into Time Lord behavior without thinking about it. I adore the way you have introduced Alistair's son, and of course the way the Doctor/Joshua ran circles round him metaphorically. In other words I really adored this chapter, if you haven't figured out already from my gushing.

I've got this stupid, silly grin on my face I have not one single idea why...

Fantastic chapter. Keep writing!