...Ho. Holy crap. I don't know what to say XD That was fuggin' /intense/ to the max and this has to be the most f'ed-up Axel that I've ever seen. Just...wow. *sits in awe*

This story... was amazing..
It like drew me in. It was so full of emotion and perfectly written. You perfectly expressed how Roxas felt, his pain, and how he had given up and at the end when Kairi is kind of out of it, knows there's no way to escape and just numbly walks out towards Axel... shivers.
you are my hero

Amazing.

Wow, how intense. Very nice.

I liked,
=]

=O thisi remindss me of this one movie I saw, uhm, wolfcreek I think, me and my friend hated me. BUT if it had been written like this. OMG it'd be an absolutely amazing movie! Just like this fic, except, yah its a fici haha.

ahh so creepy and axel was so amazingly in character, which is pretty creepy. omg roxas had hiss tongue ripped out ahh poor roxas god this is creepy. ahh i wish there was more showingn the aftermath of what happend with kairi ubt nah wouldn't wanna ruin it haha it was good just how it is. i'm faving this

and i just got a new laptop sosoo i hope my parents don't see the need to check my history and see this little number. haha byebye

anyway awesome job! write more like this.

OMC PLEASE UPDATES! PLEASE

and i thought i was the only one who saw the axel/kairi subtext in "Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?". congrats, you beat me to and did a damn good job.

wow
that was intense
like extremely intense
but also extremely amazing
kudos to you
i really love how you portrayed axel
even if it did scare me a bit...

"Humming music in her ears. Slender snow white throat vibrating, buzzing of bees in a circle around her head. Gentle tapping of sandal-clad foot on lawn chair, reclined out to display long, lithe body." you pwned my soul with that line...PWNED it..

"A fallen angel whose wings someone had pulled off like a fly's. See the webs, they're transparent."

YUMMY.

They died three years ago, The forced rush of his thoughts answered. And God died tonight
woah. powerful lines.

descrip and imagery eats me away.

"Today's a beautiful day. We can find a meadow and do it for a while, but then I got a hot date with someone else. What do you think, Roxy-babe? Big blue eyes?"

OMFG AXEL-ESQUE. AXEL-ESQUE.
HOLY FUCKING FROGS LEGS ITS
SO TWISTED I LOVE IT.

-reads on-

"Axel Friend's my name. And a friend I will be."

-squees with delight and then dies-
axel characterzation makes me
die happy.

die fucking slap happy drunk
at a frat party omfg.


amazing.


axel crazy sadistic murderface
...why does that make him so
much sexier...?


"If you touch that phone, I don't have to keep my promise anymore. If you even touch that phone, I'm gonna getcha."

yummyy. chuckieface for sure.

wgyknedrthklgejhylpmjhkl;etmh

ITS OVER WHAT THE FUCK .

I WAS AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT
AND BAM - all in maii face.

omg omg omg omg omg omg

this was so utterly amazing.
the charactersqueezation

was like. the best ever.
and for your FIRST M
fic. my god you should
get an award. a super
award named george
-hands to constance-

so excuse me as i worship the ground
you walk on. fucking amazing, this
is the best roxasaxelkairi in the history
of such.



(: fav! and spam! for life.
love. it.


love love love love it.

-- anaface

This hooked me in like no other. I couldn't stop reading, I really couldn't.

This was so beautiful and outrageously creepy. Especially regarding Axel and Roxas'... relationship? It was scary as shit.

but omg it was so good at the same time. Axel's stalker-ness was just so Axel and Kairi was perfect and I can't think of any other ways to describe my love for this.

My heart goes out to Roxas. Kairi just a little bit. Mostly Roxas. lol

This is not going to be a very coherant review.

This was *terrifying*.

I got hooked in the beginning when the Roxas bit started, probably because it was such a jar from the Kairi's "haven, safe place" to the dark material. The language was very very vivid. Just the right amount of 'prose' and 'regular' language, and just... gah. I haven't read the inspiration or heard the song(s) that inspired it either, but I'll be damned if I'm not going to go make sure my front (and back and side and windows) are locked.

My heart was *pounding* by the end of it. It still is. O_O Amazing, amazing job.

;~; It was so.. so amazing.. ;~; I LOVED IT SO MUCH! THANK YOU! -is choking up.- I FEEL SO BAD FOR ROXAS! -sobs.-