Wow! I love Dracula both the book (one of my favourites ever) and the films. This is one of the best fanfics out there. You are a brilliant writer. Please keep writing. Such intensity and feeling in just one chapter.. wonderful stuff.

This is so beautifully poetic. All of your works are really well written.
I love MinaxDracula!

Sweet Heaven, this is poetry!
I love all your "Dracula" stories, but this is to be one of my most favourites.

In the movie itself, the scene was quite...well, intriguing and involving. It's a short one, from a certain point of view, but you've found a way to extend time... Focusing on Mina's toughts and sensations...This was just so beautiful...
You're a great writer, and I've sincerely loved your description of the whole scene and your insights on her feelings.

My favorite story of yours thus far, and believe me that is saying something!

Hi my name is Thyme M. Derby and I am 14 years old and I live in TN and I think the story of Dark Night,Make My Bed is a really great story and I can not wait to read the rest of the story and I hope to talk to you some time and become frinds. your Frind Thyme M. Derby

Wow... good one-shot! I like the way Mina's thoughts and POV are described very much! I've always thought the movie didn't focus enough on the strange relationship between Mina and Dracula... this writing definitely doés focus on it!
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You are truly an amazing writer, I loved it.

*whistles* Incredibly sensual! You compose fantastic symphonies of descriptions, Thyme, incorporating all the instruments of the orchestra for your events (heh, unintentional V for Vendetta reference). Your one-shots are always so insightful, and so full of life!

It feels pointless to keep saying "beautiful prose", but, yet again, that was my dominant reaction to this piece. I like "there is a hint of dead meat on his breath, and fresh blood on his lips."

I agree with the earlier comments this was beautiful.

Simply beautiful! The words flow like silk.

Ah, very...beautifully written! I love it. Excellent job!

Beautiful!