Hi my name is Thyme M. Derby and I am 14 years old and I live in TN and I think the story of Dark Night,Make My Bed is a really great story and I can not wait to read the rest of the story and I hope to talk to you some time and become frinds. your Frind Thyme M. Derby

Wow... good one-shot! I like the way Mina's thoughts and POV are described very much! I've always thought the movie didn't focus enough on the strange relationship between Mina and Dracula... this writing definitely doés focus on it!:-)
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You are truly an amazing writer, I loved it.

*whistles* Incredibly sensual! You compose fantastic symphonies of descriptions, Thyme, incorporating all the instruments of the orchestra for your events (heh, unintentional V for Vendetta reference). Your one-shots are always so insightful, and so full of life!

It feels pointless to keep saying "beautiful prose", but, yet again, that was my dominant reaction to this piece. I like "there is a hint of dead meat on his breath, and fresh blood on his lips."

I agree with the earlier comments - this was beautiful.

Simply beautiful! The words flow like silk.

Ah, very...beautifully written! I love it. Excellent job!

Beautiful!