Very well done.:)

Mmmmmm, creepy and fantastic. o.o I like it.

Wow. Simply amazing.

This was gorgeous I love your style, it's so lyrical. It gives such a mystical feel to the story. I'm so fav-ing this.

This is probably the most amazing NnoiNel fanfiction that exists. It really touches on things about them and their mentalities and their situations and it is amazing how you did it. You surpassed speech and remembering and made it beyond that- very amazing.

I like this; it's not often one gets Nnoitra introspection.

Her eyes, like silvered pools, reflect his leer back at him, and to his relief turn to survey the stained landscape before returning, back to him—without a word her lips (noticeably dainty) turn down to infuriate him. A single, elegant movement—his rage simply explodes.

INGENIUS. Words like poetry...the passion in your writing gives me that kick that makes me enjoy being a reader and a writer...and now I'm addicted. Truly you are an elite. *FAVS!*