Seriously...this story was the most AWESOME Naruto story I have EVER read within...woo, a LONG TIME. ._. You really did have good intentions when you killed off Kushina, although while reading this I thought that Minato would maybe die as well in the first chapter. >w< I looved Kushina's attitude in here, she was so paternal and caring towards Naruto yet ALSO loud-mouthed and 'boyish' in my opinion, in the fics I had read she's been more...feminine. owo

I would REALLY love to see a second chapter...it may not be too soon or anything judging by the published date, but still. owo

this is great work! I really loved it. I wish I could beta for you, but unfortunately I will be pretty busy with school and stuff. Best of luck on finding a beta. but if you really can't just post whatever you have got, let the public readers read it and read their comments, then make whatever changes you need and re post it.

I honestly must say that the ending of this chapter is my favorite part. Yes, its sad that Kushina passed on, kinda made me emotional but that's cause of the hormones that I've got lol to many kids equal the pile up of emotions.
Very well written, and as you said very long! Doesn't mean that it wasn't worth it. I hope you'll update soon!

^_^
Its been a while since I checked out your stories.
I have to say, even after two years, I STILL love your writing style.
=3

I think you told the interactions between Kushina and Kyuubi quite well, though it was a little confusing to sort out who was who when you described the ninja's from Kyuubi's point of view. Why would the Uchihas be attacking the Hokage's son??

Also, I think if they knew it was the kyuubi, at least a few of them would be attacking with more powerful Jutsu, and not just kunai and other weapons.


I still loved the idea, and I definitely want to read more.

~Daitoshi

This is awesome! Please tell me you are going to continue this.

I have to say that this was a rich chapter. Characters like Rin and some of the tailed beast had small, yet fulfilling detailed roles that were interesting to read.

And your Kushina! She stole the fic from Kyuubi before they even met! I enjoyed her big sister mentality with Kakashi,her larger than life entrance into the meeting, her fight with the other nin, and her influence on the Kyuubi. I was hoping that she could have survived but you did what you felt needed done (sob, I was thinking a few what if but she died so i'll drop it)

I hope you plan on continuing ...

goddamit its been a year and its really bugging me that you havent updated this story with its original plot do you know how hard it is to find a story like this thats actually readable! so pleease freakking update cuz i dont usually review but i can forget this story even if its been seven months.

the end of the fic was so cute! More please!

this is simply AMAZING work! the story is well thought out and detailed, the characters stay in character and are rendered beautifully. I do hope you will eventually finish this because it really needs to be done

lol, u can do it Kyuu!

Great chapter! I love this already!! I can't wait to read more!

Hm, I wonder if Kyuubi will just take Naruto or go with him back to the villiage? I think number one...

GREAT! I hope you post more its really amazing.

Love the story!<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Can't wait for more!

Love

Kiri

Fun. Complete fun.

When will there be a next chapter I love the first now where is the second